Contrasts (a haibun)
by
E. W. Richardson
Wednesday, May 14, 2008
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Here is a piece done in one of my favorite forms of verse, the haibun
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Contrasts
(a haibun)
a May afternoon
an old man rocks on the porch -
smoke curls from his pipe
From the ashes of my youth, where lusty passion once burned and war napalmed hopes and dreams, many things have grown…flowers, tall trees, tasty fruits…and more than a few weeds.
Protruding here and there are the bare bones of reality and inescapable mortality.
Dwelling on such things is like a force of nature…it is neither good nor bad but can be either,
from a bloom of silk
a warm, delicate fragrance
dreams of yesterday
The sun sits behind clouds pregnant with rain, casting a rainbow with its final rays.
What a spectacular end to the day!
I return to my chores, separating and folding laundry, our intermingled clothing becoming a dichotomy of texture and hue…like parts of a flower…rough, sturdy leaves and soft, scented diaphanous petals.
As the light fades, the rain begins again, its steady liquid hiss a blank canvass on which my mind finger-paints memories.
© ewrichardson 2008
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| Reviewed by Silent Dream |
5/19/2008 |
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I love this form. Beautifully captured moment and reflections..
Well done!
((Hugs and LOve)) ~SilentDream |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
5/15/2008 |
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| One word...gorgeous. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/15/2008 |
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This form, these lines are exquisite, Erny. Love this.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Bill Broome |
5/15/2008 |
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Without wasting words; your work is exquisite. And, not surprising. - Bill
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
5/15/2008 |
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Beautiful however i find that of
all your poems I have read I can't
Chose just one for I found many of your
Writings that I love and this one is no
Excellent visuals and tone,flow are
Brilliant my favor
from a bloom of silk
a warm, delicate fragrance
dreams of yesterday
So romantic Love it!!
Peace Love and Hugesss....Morning Star
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/15/2008 |
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Oh what a beautiful and realistic feel this has. Can smell the smoke and hear the pitter patter of the rain drops cleansing all it touches...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/15/2008 |
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After reading many of your poems, still I can get out of my head the picture of a literary wise man in a cave, pondering, meditating, and trying to tell with as few words as possible the wonders of poetry.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
5/14/2008 |
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The haibun is also one of my favorites, and
you do it so well. - Gene. |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen |
5/14/2008 |
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| beautiful! beautiful! beautiful! |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
5/14/2008 |
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warm delicate words
seep from your ink-filled soul pen
as time remembers
Just an overdue Hello, to a lost-touch-with poet while I was off A.D.
See what you inspire from me?? :o)
Blessings ~~ Micke |
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