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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
6/19/2008 |
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| Great visual poem and write. ********** |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
6/18/2008 |
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I especially like the first four lines. They drew me in to taste the rest of this delicious piece. Hugs~
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Jeff Mason |
6/6/2008 |
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| Quite beautiful. I have done a couple of visual poems. I love what you've done here. Intensely romantic message. -- Jeff |
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| Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl |
6/4/2008 |
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| Very nice.... |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
6/4/2008 |
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| Beautiful, beautiful work. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
6/3/2008 |
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| beautiful! i am glad you got it done! |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
6/3/2008 |
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| well done, awesome visual...its holds everything quite nicely :) |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
6/3/2008 |
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| Experiment succeeds beautifully. - Gene |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
6/3/2008 |
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| I love visual poetry and have experimented with a few of my own. I love the challenge of not only finding the right words and combinations of words, but to then fit it all together in a visually artistic way. You have done a beautiful job here, but I am not surprised as you always produce fine, fine work. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
6/3/2008 |
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The only thing left to say after reading this poem is, Cheers!
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
6/3/2008 |
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Exceptional piece, Erny...
Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta |
6/3/2008 |
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| Wow, awesome! |
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| Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers |
6/3/2008 |
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| How visual, I am drawn into the cup. This is one of your best. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/3/2008 |
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Erny,
A shape poem, exquisitely penned - I, too, am speechless -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Bill Broome |
6/3/2008 |
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Erny, You old rascal, this is so good and different that even for you, it is outstanding!
I'm really at a loss for words doing it justice.
So, I'll drink to this unique and wonderful form of liquid poetry! ! !
- Bill
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