A Poet to His Lover
by
E. W. Richardson
Thursday, October 09, 2008
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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This poem is a sestina, written as a love letter.
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My dearest, let us drive into the sun
Through doors of possibilities and dreams,
Leaving behind who we were, for a time,
Finding an alternate reality
Of blushing bliss, when fingertips are kissed
And sweet joys in simple intimacies.
Let us celebrate those intimacies!
Forget the shadows! Let’s walk in the sun,
Tasting its heat on our lips, softly kissed,
Not with fickle passion but lucid dreams!
Let’s make holding hands our reality,
Letting our heartbeats set the course of time!
And we will make a conspirator of time,
You and I, weaving tender intimacies
Into a warm, gingham reality
Of cool, moonlit nights and days in the sun,
A blend of soft and bold, the fabric of dreams,
Delicate as the sigh, from lips just kissed.
Do you remember the first time we kissed?
I remember it vividly, though time
Has passed; it still lives within my dreams
Writing with the ink of intimacies
Upon vellum pages, spun with the sun,
In the journal of love’s reality.
Some say love does not fit in reality…
But what could be more real than to be kissed,
That sudden, warming caress, like the sun
Breaking though winter clouds in morning time?
What is more real than simple intimacies
Such as lying side by side, sharing dreams?
Are we to believe that there is no place for dreams,
When without them, there would be no reality
Only existence, devoid of intimacies?
Not this man! I would much rather be kissed
And rest within your embrace, spending time
Contemplating your hair’s color in the sun!
Tell me your dreams my love, softly kissed
By this reality…this is our time,
Our intimacies, our day in the sun!
© ewrichardson 2008
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
10/11/2008 |
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Absolutely beautiful...
Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
10/10/2008 |
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Beautiful write my friend, very tender, real, all weaved within a dreamy passionate poem...well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
10/9/2008 |
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Erny, this is so very beautiful, and you amaze me with your technique. I especially love,"And we will make a conspirator of time, You and I, weaving tender intimacies Into a warm, gingham reality." Lovely.
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/9/2008 |
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| lovely-loving and passionate |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
10/9/2008 |
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An absolutly beautiful love letter. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
10/9/2008 |
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I have enjoyed the reading of "A Poet to His Lover".
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
10/9/2008 |
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| So disciplined, and such a beautiful testament to your love. -gene |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
10/9/2008 |
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Heavenly bliss riding high on cloud 9, wonderfully moving....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow |
10/9/2008 |
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Oh my goodness! To write a sestina is difficult enough, keeping the storyline while adhering to its strict pattern. But to write one of such beauty, joy, tenderness, and that hint of playfulness is amazing! Exceptional work here.. and indeed it is the most beautiful of love letters, my friend...I am glad you decided to post it here!
Always,
M |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/9/2008 |
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Exquisite, Erny, love how you ended one stanza with a word and began the next with the same one - perfect.
(((HUGS))) and love, Lady Buckeye. |
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