Angel of the Wood
by
E. W. Richardson
Saturday, May 23, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Set in the haibun form.
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nighttime solitude
the veiled moon casts no shadows –
the house is silent
I met a woman in a dream last night, walking in a meadow of wildflowers. Her hair seemed to float on a gentle breeze…and she held a leather book to her breast. From time to time she paused to open the book, as though searching for something.
There was an air about her…a fey light of angelic innocence and bolder passions, promising sultry glories.
Intrigued, I invited her to rest and we sat for a while beside a brook, listening to wind and water sing.
What do you seek, I asked and she told me…I have lost pages from my book and fear it will become a journal never completed. She opened the book then and I could see among its vellum pages, living tears and the gap of a life interrupted.
Perhaps they will be returned to you, perhaps you will find them, I said, but in the meantime, pick up you pen, turn to the first blank page and begin again.
Uncertain at first, she put pen to paper and in no time, words began to flow. She smiled then laughed and kissing me on the cheek, she walked away into the wood.
As I watched her go, I thought of my own book and its many gaps.
Perhaps, it is time to follow my own advice…it’s never too late to begin anew.
a bright May morning –
in a periwinkle sky
lost moments are found
© ewrichardson 2009
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
7/24/2009 |
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Amazing! An absolute gem!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by shuyaasha misra |
7/17/2009 |
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| beautiful..! |
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| Reviewed by Connie Faust |
7/16/2009 |
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Now that I've scrolled up to add my comment, only the last 3 lines are visible. They could stand alone as a writing of beauty and depth. "a bright May morning --
in a periwinkle sky
lost moments are found"
I never met a haibun I didn't love, and since this is the first time I've met one, I'm charmed. The introductory verse, the story itself with its clever wisdom, and of course the finale, are captivating.
Connie |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
6/1/2009 |
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A perfect haibun, Ernie. You're right. It's never too late
to start anew. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
5/31/2009 |
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...evocative excellence Erny, as always.
Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Bill Broome |
5/30/2009 |
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You take us to a place and a person we would have never met. And, you did it in tender and loving exchanges between a Vision and you. All rules are suspended to allow the story to be so sweetly told.
I thank you for a warm bit of your wise talent. - Bill
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
5/27/2009 |
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A profound message in this poem. I love how you set the mood with silence and then demonstrate that silence with the woman's empty pages. Great writing!
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
5/26/2009 |
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Fantastic and brilliant work,I enjoy reading it,take care
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
5/25/2009 |
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| Erny, this is beautiful and inspirational. It's so nice to read your work again. |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
5/24/2009 |
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No, never too late, E. This is wonderful. I was lost in this write and wished it would go on. But then, it will in your book...
Lin |
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| Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow |
5/24/2009 |
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| What is that saying... 'Physician, heal thyself.' Methinks perhaps you just did and with a haibun no less? Lovely and soft and endearing.. and filled with wisdom. How nice it is to read your words again!!! Bravo, my dear friend.. BRAVO! M |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
5/24/2009 |
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Ernie, excellent write, I totally enjoyed the read.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
5/24/2009 |
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| love this! beautiful! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/24/2009 |
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Nice poem, Erny; well penned! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Lady RedBird. :D |
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| Reviewed by Nizamettin Esen Haymanali |
5/24/2009 |
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| A little bunch of colorful feelings and dreams. |
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