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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
7/28/2009 |
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You brought me to the moment. Excellent!
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow |
7/25/2009 |
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That last line.. you know I love it.. as it just changes the whole mood of the piece. It does for me anyway and I think I would asking who had the nerve to mess up my quiet..))
Always a pleasure to read you, my friend...
M |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
7/24/2009 |
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Peaceful ....I held my breath! Wonderful write.
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
7/20/2009 |
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This is very nice,I enjoy it,take care
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
7/19/2009 |
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| 5-7-5-7-7. GREAT WORK, WRITTEN WELL WITH VERY GOOD IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
7/18/2009 |
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Lovely tanka, Erny. Thanks for allowing me
to share he moment. -gene |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
7/18/2009 |
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Splendid tanka, Erny...
Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
7/17/2009 |
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| I know the sound. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
7/17/2009 |
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| lovely! |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
7/17/2009 |
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Wonderful write, breathtaking!
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
7/16/2009 |
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Such a wonderful opportunity to become one with nature...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
7/16/2009 |
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This is got to be one of the shortest poems I think I've read of yours, E.W. I really like this Tanka.
Doug |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/16/2009 |
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I love the Japanese form of poetry; both haiku and tanka. This is lovely. Thank you for sharing the mood. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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