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| Reviewed by angie jones |
1/21/2007 |
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mmm you have hit a button there, beautifuly wording
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen |
10/26/2006 |
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oh, I have known this feeling...well-written
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
9/11/2006 |
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| a concise and powerful statement of lost hope ... |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
9/7/2006 |
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A lovely literary lament, Robin. I see your use of mostly hard consonants, softened by dreamier soft syllables, as a delicate hand. And, in the ending line, hardness, without hope.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
9/7/2006 |
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"Sunset of a Dream" flows leaving a sad-wise foam on the waves of the sea of hope.
~ I would think that they become humus to nourish the tree of dreams.
I salute You, Poet.
In gratitude and in admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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