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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
8/8/2008 |
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This poem is AWESOME Paul, I want to be here, (( Haggard's Halls)) Think I've been here, hiding around
a darkly lit corner!
Your chosen words astound me Paul!
Wonderful job done with evil and good/Etc.
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Soulful SHEExooo
STay Positive! I'm glad I am here, I missed y o u r deep knowing heart! I will try not to drift too far, now... I will try, if so I will stay as I am about to show! |
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| Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten |
6/18/2008 |
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The Hall's echo in their gallant pride, knowing what prevails within them! Excellent Paul~
Sorry I've been so invisible...my halls weren't echoing, they were secretly building new ones behind my back, whispering in too low of voices and somehow...?...I done lost my way...:)
But, I'm back! ...and I must catch up!
"Which way did he go George, which way did he go?" LOL! What was that off of???...some cartoon probably :)
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~ |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
6/11/2008 |
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| Like the sound of marching feet. I love the strong drum-beat rhythm to match the mood and tone of this write, Paul. TY Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
6/11/2008 |
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Good Morning Paul,
I enjoyed Haggaed's Halls & felt apart of the vision I could see within your words
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
6/11/2008 |
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Needless to say.. a profound write indeed...
Vesna :) |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
6/8/2008 |
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| Great verse. It flows well . I can almost feel the mystic in Haggard Halls......M |
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| Reviewed by Tiana ~ |
6/4/2008 |
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| A wonderfully written, inspiring poem, Paul. I will have to catch up on your wonderful series ... Love and hugs to you my friend - Tiana |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
6/3/2008 |
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Paul,
I love how you voice this challenge with such positivity. This part in the series slips right into place with its strong rhythm and rhyme. Love your word choices in this part - good and bad are clearly outlined. Your talent shines here! Love and Hugs~
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Pierre Ortega |
6/2/2008 |
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All those times I felt my life had stalled,
I found myself in haggards halls.
Excellent write.
Pierre |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
6/2/2008 |
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A beautiful prophetic piece that leaves one to take pause.....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/2/2008 |
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| Paul, you know I love Haggard's Hall series, and this one is superb. Great internal rhyme and your rhythmic flow is fantastic!...ET |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
6/2/2008 |
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| great versing Paul |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/2/2008 |
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| very well developed, inspirational poem ... |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
6/2/2008 |
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| Awesome. This is my first exposure to your story. I will be reading more. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
6/2/2008 |
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| Very well done Paul. Great series you're doing here. Keep it up my friend. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/2/2008 |
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This is Spectaular,,, Your words are amazing,,piercing the heart.
Love and Blessings to you,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
6/2/2008 |
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| I can't tell you how much I look forward to your posts. Your writing is superb and your words and combinations of words are beautifully replete with meaning and insight. Your wisdom and your propensity for deep thought glow in this lovely write. |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
6/2/2008 |
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| Sorry to go wandering off into la la land, but every time I see the word Haggard I think of Merle Haggard. I still enjoyed your inspirational write. |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
6/2/2008 |
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| Paul, I see this in the same way as Fee does...becoming a wonderful book of verse...a lesson held within, for you teach much. |
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| Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader) |
6/2/2008 |
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| Good versus evil penned in a vivid way. For we battle not against flesh and blood.............Well Done! Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/2/2008 |
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Although this is a classic story that I can see becoming a book as notable as the Knights of the Round Table, I can also see certain segments being ammended to make fantastic song lyrics...sort of Meatloaf style. Well done as always Paul.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/2/2008 |
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| The road to hell is an easy one once you ride on its slippery slope but you must prevail and with the Trinity your victory you soon will have won |
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