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| Reviewed by John Domino |
9/26/2008 |
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Powerful!
May God bless you richly with success! |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
8/8/2008 |
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Hi Paul -
At first, I thought it to be the dark knight/movie that inspired this gregarously great write!
I love this poem, from beginning to eerie ending!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Soulful SHEExooo
STay Positive! as the bright light gets closer... |
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| Reviewed by Dorlana Vann |
8/4/2008 |
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Hi Paul,
Nice creepy poem. My favorite part -
"In sunlight there's no shadow
to reflect the time of day
but on a lonely moonlit night
each hour slips away."
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
7/29/2008 |
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| Paul, this is excellent, and something we all must one day face. Good work! |
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| Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader) |
7/23/2008 |
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| wonderfully dark read, i will be visiting you again..i like your poetry |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
7/22/2008 |
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thanks for the 8 Paul, some great dark verse you've penned here, makes my throat tighten, that grime reaper carries quite a big blade
:-) |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
7/22/2008 |
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| Very nice writing Paul...but then again I love the eerie dark stuff. Love Holly |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
7/19/2008 |
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| A walk on the dark side Paul. Much said in this powerful poem ! Its a ride many take and I hope its toward the LIGHT!!!!!...........M |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/18/2008 |
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I will just echo Vickie's words. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
7/17/2008 |
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Paul
I enjoyed this reading of your depiction of "Man In Black"
These Lines Are My Fav Of This Darkened Write of Yours
"In sunlight there's no shadow
to reflect the time of day
but on a lonely moonlit night
each hour slips away."
Totally Awsome :)
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
7/15/2008 |
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Oooh, a bit eerie my friend, but powerfully written with outstanding imagery...I too thought about Johnny Cash when I first began reading, then the Grim Reaper...nevertheless an outstanding write!
Blessings,
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
7/15/2008 |
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Paul,
Very spooky! I have a series of poems with this title - never posted - about a ghost I saw in my house. I've talked to others who have also seen "a man in black". I can't help but wonder if we have seen this fellow in your poem - always watching and ready to collect those with unpunched tickets. lol.
I love the verse:
Trees will bend as if in wind.
Small branches, they break bough
but of that man all dressed in black
they shan't forget somehow.
Fantastic work on this ominous poem! Love and Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Smith |
7/14/2008 |
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| Paul, we will all have to face this ride one day and I loved the way you portrayed it. My first thoughts was this was going to be about Johnny Cash and did I get a surprise. I must say, this is good writing. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
7/14/2008 |
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I have to agree with this one Paul! You wrote it
with excellent perception. Superb poem!...ET
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
7/14/2008 |
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It is one train we will all ride indeed,,,, Your poem is excellent,,,, you truly stir many emotions as I read this..
Love, Christine |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
7/14/2008 |
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| A very imaginative write and certainly has the mark of truth. We will all meet our maker sooner or later. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
7/14/2008 |
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The Grim Reaper cometh when our time on earth is done, gives pause to what life is really all about...Yet there are those I can think of also referred to as the man in black, Dale Earnhardt, Sr. and the infamous Johnny Cash. I wonder if they had it all figured out early on...
Be always safe,
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| Reviewed by Tiana ~ |
7/14/2008 |
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| Wonderfully written, Paul! A keeper ... hugs |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
7/14/2008 |
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| yes, i could well imasgine johnny Cash as well-a good sobering write |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/14/2008 |
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Excellant write my friend...one of your very best and a great ballad that I can almost hear set to music and played in a Johnny Cash kind of style. REally like this one Paul.
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
7/14/2008 |
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| Amazing! You grabed my mind and heart with this! Spotless |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
7/14/2008 |
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| Skillfully composed poem that left me with goose bumps - I pictured this Angel of Death very clearly and his effect on all that he nears. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
7/14/2008 |
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| Splendid poetry and a wake up call for all. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
7/14/2008 |
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| I like this Paul. You did an outstanding job with this write my friend. Stay well and God bless. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
7/14/2008 |
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| Brilliantly penned Paul and with perfect rhyme and flow. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
7/14/2008 |
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Great write, Paul; well penned! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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