|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|When you think you know someone, they can surprise you with aspects of them that were long hidden. Great poem with a dramatic ending.
|Reviewed by June Thompson
I love the quote on your bio.. perfectly suits my moods and thoughts these days...
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
This one took me in many different directions. Oooh, the rope ending... OUCH! Creative. Very well done.
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|tHIS KIND OF gets to my neck PaUL. it's a very interesting piece to read. Hang in there. G|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent moods of motion...|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Strong and sad poem..|
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
The speaks from a broken heart, or one that has been broken. The emotion is felt!
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Deep rise of motions|
|Reviewed by The Gentle Man
|I'm sure many can relate to these feelings of hopelessness. You said it well Paul!|
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|sad but expressed very well|
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Great emotional write.
|Reviewed by Theresa Koch
|"Turned my world to seed
Planted by your greed"
BOY can I relate to this piece!
As I sign my final divorce papers~
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Heartfelt and sad Paul!!|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Superb use of words from my new wordsmiyth friend. I love your poetry.
|Reviewed by harry k stammer (Reader)
|Yeah! swinging from a tree of pain, great write. hks|
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
Fantastic write once
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|stark reality Paul, well penned...trust is a must, no doubt about it and you proved that point well!|
|Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
|Poignant and heart-choking... as only loss of trust in love can be.|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Mercy. Shouldn't this be listed under 'horror'. Once trust is lost, nothing else really matters does it? Well done.|
|Reviewed by Nicole Lasher
|A good illustration of the dry cold of broken trust.|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|An excellent piece, bittersweet but true!|
|Reviewed by Jim Corbin
|Interesting rhyme and metre, Paul....and a thought provoking message!
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|A very powerful, heartfelt a sad poem, Paul. Written extremely well.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Deeply emotive, heart wrenching and well penned.|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|I felt every word of this fantastic write Paul..Gotta love it when a pen is held with such intense passion....ty, Dani|
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
Well written! I hope my mood is not contagious.
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Heartfelt and sad write,
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|This is a sad note of thought. But one that is felt apparently by the producer of the words. I pray your hurt passes quickly and the scars are shallow and pale. ~SH~|