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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
11/16/2007 |
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When you think you know someone, they can surprise you with aspects of them that were long hidden. Great poem with a dramatic ending.
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by June Thompson |
8/2/2003 |
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bullseye
wonderfully done...
I love the quote on your bio.. perfectly suits my moods and thoughts these days... |
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| Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) |
7/4/2003 |
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This one took me in many different directions. Oooh, the rope ending... OUCH! Creative. Very well done.
Emilie |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
6/25/2003 |
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| tHIS KIND OF gets to my neck PaUL. it's a very interesting piece to read. Hang in there. G |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/23/2003 |
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| excellent moods of motion... |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
6/23/2003 |
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| Strong and sad poem.. |
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| Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci |
6/23/2003 |
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Paul,
The speaks from a broken heart, or one that has been broken. The emotion is felt!
Hugs,
Maria |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
6/23/2003 |
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| Deep rise of motions |
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| Reviewed by The Gentle Man |
6/23/2003 |
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| I'm sure many can relate to these feelings of hopelessness. You said it well Paul! |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
6/23/2003 |
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| sad but expressed very well |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
6/23/2003 |
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Great emotional write.
~Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
6/23/2003 |
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"Turned my world to seed
Planted by your greed"
BOY can I relate to this piece!
As I sign my final divorce papers~ |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
6/23/2003 |
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| Heartfelt and sad Paul!! |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
6/23/2003 |
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Superb use of words from my new wordsmiyth friend. I love your poetry.
Susan |
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| Reviewed by harry k stammer (Reader) |
6/23/2003 |
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| Yeah! swinging from a tree of pain, great write. hks |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
6/23/2003 |
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Hi Paul,
Fantastic write once
again...
Trixie :) |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/23/2003 |
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| stark reality Paul, well penned...trust is a must, no doubt about it and you proved that point well! |
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| Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations |
6/23/2003 |
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| Poignant and heart-choking... as only loss of trust in love can be. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
6/23/2003 |
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| Mercy. Shouldn't this be listed under 'horror'. Once trust is lost, nothing else really matters does it? Well done. |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Lasher |
6/23/2003 |
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| A good illustration of the dry cold of broken trust. |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
6/23/2003 |
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| An excellent piece, bittersweet but true! |
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| Reviewed by Jim Corbin |
6/23/2003 |
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Interesting rhyme and metre, Paul....and a thought provoking message!
Jim :) |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
6/23/2003 |
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A very powerful, heartfelt a sad poem, Paul. Written extremely well.
~Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
6/23/2003 |
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| Deeply emotive, heart wrenching and well penned. |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
6/23/2003 |
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| I felt every word of this fantastic write Paul..Gotta love it when a pen is held with such intense passion....ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
6/23/2003 |
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GM, Paul
Well written! I hope my mood is not contagious.
tn |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
6/23/2003 |
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Heartfelt and sad write,
my friend.
Excellent poem!!
~~Linda~~ |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
6/23/2003 |
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| This is a sad note of thought. But one that is felt apparently by the producer of the words. I pray your hurt passes quickly and the scars are shallow and pale. ~SH~ |
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