Flouted Pill
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Sunday, May 30, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Tip-toe, enfolding gray, sponge me away,
or steal my seated feet of clay out from
under me; either way, I fall today
into phantom frieze, come, foggy gray, come…
Hold me, depthless mind, terror left behind,
or sacrifice some dated memory
to rescue me from selfish being-blind;
I’m scared of my kind, tired of misery.
Fold me, years bereft -- flatten what is left,
or release your crease of patterned futures,
take sad weight from me, I ache to feel heft
of happiness repair fragile sutures.
Free me, flouted pill, bring peace to my will…
or return me to nether's shadowed chill.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Photo by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 5/30/04
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/2/2004 |
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the choice always remains ours ...
deeply powerful soul-searching poem ... |
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| Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger |
6/2/2004 |
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| Outstanding poetry, Poet. I hope all is well. Thank you for sharing this POWERFUL write. |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
6/2/2004 |
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I love your poetry Erin, This was outstanding,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
6/2/2004 |
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| excellent write. |
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| Reviewed by David Livingstone |
6/1/2004 |
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Poet Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen, you do find new subjects to work with.
This poem is written in a very unique way. It is a philosophical input of poetical emotions. I am diving through it.
Thank you for posting this magnificent poem.
David Livingstone |
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| Reviewed by Eva Black (Reader) |
6/1/2004 |
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This is just great. Art flows and mystery grows, and an arcane is born through the mind of imagination.
You done it again, and this time you made a striking minds.
Eva Black, BFA
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
6/1/2004 |
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"Flouted Pill" made me speechless... A surreal trilling sensation took me over... "Flouted Pill" is a to be studied heedfully.
I am impressed with this composition.
Thank You for sharing "Flouted Pill".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
5/30/2004 |
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| Intesting write. I think I can realte to this more than I'd care to admit. Nicely done. |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
5/30/2004 |
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| Pills are not the way, but if you wait till 4:20 that will work better, for both of us...Peace thru Inebriation, Ed & Rufuz |
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