by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Sunday, May 30, 2004
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Tip-toe, enfolding gray, sponge me away,
or steal my seated feet of clay out from
under me; either way, I fall today
into phantom frieze, come, foggy gray, come…
Hold me, depthless mind, terror left behind,
or sacrifice some dated memory
to rescue me from selfish being-blind;
I’m scared of my kind, tired of misery.
Fold me, years bereft -- flatten what is left,
or release your crease of patterned futures,
take sad weight from me, I ache to feel heft
of happiness repair fragile sutures.
Free me, flouted pill, bring peace to my will…
or return me to nether's shadowed chill.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Photo by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 5/30/04
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|Reviewed by jude forese
|the choice always remains ours ...
deeply powerful soul-searching poem ...
|Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger
|Outstanding poetry, Poet. I hope all is well. Thank you for sharing this POWERFUL write.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|I love your poetry Erin, This was outstanding,
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|Reviewed by David Livingstone
|Poet Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen, you do find new subjects to work with.
This poem is written in a very unique way. It is a philosophical input of poetical emotions. I am diving through it.
Thank you for posting this magnificent poem.
|Reviewed by Eva Black (Reader)
|This is just great. Art flows and mystery grows, and an arcane is born through the mind of imagination.
You done it again, and this time you made a striking minds.
Eva Black, BFA
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|"Flouted Pill" made me speechless... A surreal trilling sensation took me over... "Flouted Pill" is a to be studied heedfully.
I am impressed with this composition.
Thank You for sharing "Flouted Pill".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Intesting write. I think I can realte to this more than I'd care to admit. Nicely done.|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Pills are not the way, but if you wait till 4:20 that will work better, for both of us...Peace thru Inebriation, Ed & Rufuz|