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Moon-Limned Poem
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Tuesday, September 28, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Upon my horizon, at dusk,
laid a few far-off clouds,
purpled with majesty.
Tall, fleecy towers kissed
by desert night. The sky
looked broody and bruised.
Faint eyes of stars twinkled
and radiated their foreknowledge.
A pink shimmer hung
between heavens and Earth.
Hushed, now, as cloud gives birth…
Upon my horizon, just after dusk,
scalloped edges of a cloud-flower
become faintly limned
with a glowing silver-white.
Enchanted, I watch in delight
as cloud births a moon. Stars cheer,
sky grows moodier. Moon smiles.
I am pierced by incandescence,
bathed in invisible radiance
between heavens and Earth.
Hushed, now, as I give birth…
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Photo by Erin Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 9/28/04
Sigh... That is not how I want the photo to look. I'll try later to 'image' a better one to go with this piece. I'm such a dolt with those programs!! :)
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| Reviewed by Z McClure |
7/19/2012 |
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You have wasted no words in this delightful kaleidoscope of images,Erin!
This poem was an absolute pleasure to read. I loved your personifications- excellent job!
~Zach
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
9/28/2004 |
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(((erin)))
STUNNING! verse and pic
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/28/2004 |
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This is awesome beauty Erin! I love the pic and the poem
surpasses it! Kudo's! |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
9/28/2004 |
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Very sweet and tender composition Erin...
Radiates with enchantment and beauty...
Love it...
Peter |
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