The Divine Human
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Saturday, September 03, 2005
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Inside, petrified by limited sight,
Waits the Divine Human. Inside,
Hidden from light, realities of night
Delusions tremble with confusion, guide
To no more than is unimagined. Inside,
Waiting in the dark of unfired fusions,
The Divine Human sits apart, denied
Its rights of profusion, bordering ruses
Barbed-wire holographs, hoping that it’s freed
Before it’s too late to vibrate inner
Fortitude into outer sublimed seeds
Of gratitude, to be released, transferred
And implanted, granted Divinity
By self-examination’s bold decree.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 9/3/05
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
9/4/2005 |
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An ontologic-teleological depicting of a cosmological traveler
with a theologic label. "The Divine Human" glows with its rich
imagery and contents, and flows to the lake of awareness, blinking
the light of wisdom.
I enjoyed the poetic excellence of "The Divine Human". It is a scented flower from the garden of a Poet that enriches the
value of THE AMERICAN FINE LETTERS and makes The Major Art richer.
Long Healthy Creative Life, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
9/4/2005 |
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We are the stuff of stars, "stardust", "golden" in the words of Joni Mitchell, but yes--limited in our vision by physical contraints and
delusion. These though contribute to our learning, as Man is still young in his evolution. Excellent write, Erin! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
9/3/2005 |
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Erin,
I like the way you write; meter and rhymed perfectly, with a powerful message in your hypnotic poetry! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/3/2005 |
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Well done Erin!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez |
9/3/2005 |
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Erin,
You Have really created a great write.
raelly well done!
peace'[',
rich criso suarez |
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