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A Diamond-Tipped Ice Pick?
by Erin E Kelly-Moen
Wednesday, February 18, 2009
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Watching 'CSI: Miami', tonight, a 2007
Rerun, the murder weapon was
A diamond-tipped ice pick!
I didn’t know such a thing existed!
It was a bridal-registry gift, priced
At $800.00. Holy Shit! Ha! At me…

I can see the benefits of a diamond-tipped
Ice pick, sol(i)d hardness versus hardened
Water; having struggled to clip a few cubes
Off a refrozen block, or hundreds! But,
All I’d ever seen were base metal picks,
Or butter knives, or meat tenderizers.
A diamond-tipped ice pick? Could I use
One? Hell, yes! And, I probably never will…

Ah, Irony! Let me kiss you with my
Diamond-shaped lips, frozen by time!

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 2/18/09



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Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 2/19/2009
amazing--i guess its the gift for someone who really does have everything!
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 2/19/2009
Amazing write on what mankind can think of....

Be always safe,
Reviewed by Tom Hyland 2/19/2009

As stated below, Matlack LACKS COUTH! An intelligent murderer would never use and Leave a Diamond-tipped Icepick - too much value - would take it with him/her! As there are no Riflings on such a shaft, ballistics would have a problem matching the weapon, wouldn't they?

I always thought that the perfect murder weapon mught be a WATER GUN with a Nitrogen -Powered capsule, that shot a pure H20 ICICLE - this would melt quickly, with the water blending with the predominant body fluid, Water - leaving no trace - just a narrow, deep hole!

How's that for a Who-Dun-Nit Plot?

peace - Tom.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 2/19/2009
What will they think of next. Will diamond ice picks work better, because they're diamond? They all work the same. *sigh* Some have too much on their hands ... still, I'd a said the same thing, "Holy shit!" LOL Well penned, Erin.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 2/19/2009
CSI Miami is the best of that series with the Vegas one running a close second & I remember that particular show and I also remember seeing it for the first thought was, "WHAT THE HELL DOES ONE NEED WITH A DIAMOND-TIPPED ICE PICK?" But then again I just bang my ice cubes on the counter top, ain't I definitely just trailor trash...LOL! Ed
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 2/18/2009
This is nice,very well written,take care


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