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‘F*** On’!
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Tuesday, February 24, 2009
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Fuck on! Miscreant! You! …
Are a billionth birth; Grown
Or not. Create are, you,
I’ve failed; I’ve lived, I’ve watched
My cats’ deaths; how odd,
Anymore,
That I survive… Subscribe.
(fuck off)
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 2/09
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| Reviewed by Carin Spirit |
3/3/2009 |
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| Well, I hope the vent helped. |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
2/25/2009 |
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Erin
I dont know what happened, but your anger is evident in these lines, I hope all is okay with you. You are in my prayers
In Christs Love
Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
2/25/2009 |
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Erin,
I'm not sure what brought this on but as a poem standing in its own right it's powerfully evocative and makes much too much of an impact to be ignored. What strength of feeling! Well done!
John |
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| Reviewed by Tom Hyland |
2/25/2009 |
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ERIN - My Dear, possibly Irish Lassie?
At the risk of causing you to "smile - the while - you kiss me sad adieu" -
Whatever nasty thing that has upset you, please: do not SUGAR-COAT it !!!
Peace - Tom.
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/25/2009 |
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Anger in these lines - at God? At the world? At yourself, for not preventing life in going on? Your words leave me wondering ... well penned, Erin.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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