Atmospheres
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Friday, May 18, 2012
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I was one of the wow-people,
When young!
Well, more like ‘o-wow’
even now, Unyounged.
I was tempered by my decade,
Lovingly teenaged
In the 70’s.
(that would be 1970’s)
I was an aby-normal ‘huh-what’ person
In that past. Yet,
Always more like ‘why’d you climb a tree
To see a robin’s egg?’
The same as now.
It was the atmosphere, you see?
Each/them has its own time, essentially.
Atmospheres rock! While
Rediscovering.. Life! While mostly,
Pale blue eggs in a young pine tree
Recreates, in bruises and laughs,
Everything I’ve ever wanted...
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 5/18/12
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| Reviewed by mark walters |
6/6/2012 |
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I like your imagery. Thank you for your work.
Mark Walters |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
5/20/2012 |
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It's great to return to our childhood, even if we can only do it with pen and paper and not actually climb a tree.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
5/19/2012 |
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Reminiscing or creating attitudes
what a blast *Erin* child like or
all grown up...pleasing!!!!
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/19/2012 |
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I loved the sixties, can't say I didn't even if I was forced to leave them behind far too quickly and become a so called "adult"
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
5/19/2012 |
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Erin, Isn't curiosity Super?! Yet there are some who have
no curiosity at all? Love it!
Always,
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
5/19/2012 |
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| Sounds as if I was the opposite, just wanting to fly through everything and do everything no matter the cost or pain to myself & others...many regrets now, but can't change the past, only the future...e |
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