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| Reviewed by Brenda Ross (Reader) |
9/28/2003 |
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Great poem. The writer's hand and the writer's pen can serve to consummate a marriage made in heaven.
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/28/2003 |
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This is excellent poetry Erin!!
love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) |
9/27/2003 |
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You know that I so enjoy your work and spirit!
But I am left wondering, which is in control?
The pen or the hand?
Ever consider a job as a lexicographer?
Keep up the great work,
your pal,
Kevin |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
9/27/2003 |
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| Unique! That you are poet! Wonderful writing.....great ideas...ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington |
9/27/2003 |
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I understoon this perfectly.... but do wish to know where Ed got his online dictionary. I need one half the time in the Den. **S**
This was a well scripted write that I could relate to. Well done, mi'lady.
~Jackie~
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/27/2003 |
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| Erin you always delight and amaze, with your ingenious poetry! |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
9/27/2003 |
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Erin, I don't know what to say!!! I avoided reading this for a while because the title brought back a vivid memory for me, but I'm glad I read it, because it wasn't at all what I thought! The "marriage" worked very well here... thank you for sharing this...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Nancy D. |
9/27/2003 |
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Nicely done Erin.
Nancy |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
9/27/2003 |
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| I like the way you set this one up. Great write! |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
9/27/2003 |
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| Erin I love this....the last few lines are fantastic...a marriage of pen and hand...wonderful thoughts..floria |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
9/27/2003 |
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"Penned Marriage"... - What is going on in Arizona? Did Erato decide to be a permanent guest in Your residence, Inspired Poet?
"Penned Marriage" is a poem to be recited by Phoebus!
Thank You for allowing us - mortals - to drink this sparkling wine!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
9/27/2003 |
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| This is wonderful poetry!! |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
9/27/2003 |
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| Erin, Here I go again, reaching for my dictionary or bringing it up on screen from the internet...damn where do all those words arise from? Another one that I actually understood and identified with, thanks, ED |
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