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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
1/31/2009 |
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| This poem touches the soul with its intensity . The words capture grief and encapsulate the feelings !.....M |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
7/21/2008 |
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| We must all grieve as we must. Noone can hurry grief along. Each individual grieves differently and no set amount of time for grief. But it does rob you of much in life, and brings desolation to the dreams you once had in the way to live your life with that person. I do think you have expressed grief very well, but had to tell my points on it too. LOL Lois |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/10/2007 |
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Very well done poem, Patsy, glad I ran across this! You capture the tangle of emotions of grief perfectly!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( |
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| Reviewed by Mark Mahoney |
3/25/2006 |
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| very descriptive for such hard subject to share, well done...Mark |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Du'Gas |
12/31/2005 |
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| You are simply awesome. Thanks for this one! |
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| Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez |
7/23/2005 |
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Death of the physical body is birth of the Spiritual body.
well done.
I shall return to read more.
peace and life',
Rich Criso Suarez |
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| Reviewed by Ernest Gwagwa (Reader) |
6/11/2005 |
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Very sombre and illustrative of the mystery of death .It makes me realise the mortality of my body and how I should invest more in my spirit.The crispness of the poem and economy with words shows your mastery in choosing the right words to express yourself.
Arthur Ernest Gwagwa |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Gibson |
3/11/2005 |
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Patsy,
Your words captured the true essence of grief. So very well written. A pleasure to find yur work and have the opportunity to read this today.
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Close Mills |
2/6/2005 |
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| Very sharp edged, well described emotions... |
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| Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader) |
12/9/2004 |
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Oh...I can relate to this...
Very well written. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
10/18/2004 |
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| Great descriptions of this type of emotion. Thanks for inviting me to drop in :-) |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/6/2004 |
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| A sad poem vividly portrayed |
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| Reviewed by James Daniels |
4/29/2004 |
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I must agree, this was a ver nice poem, keep up the great work, it was well written.
JAMES L. DANIELS |
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| Reviewed by Robert Sheridan |
4/27/2004 |
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| 'Good' "Grief" - what a well-penned poem - enjoyed your write! |
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
1/30/2004 |
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| Unfortunately, grief can steal away not only happiness but hope as well. All too true, what you have said. |
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| Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja |
1/9/2004 |
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Quite nice indeed. Well written poem.
Greetings.
www.GorejaMuseum.com |
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| Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen |
10/23/2003 |
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Ho-LEE, girl! You sure can describe this painful emotion with brilliantly descriptive verse! I'm your new fan. :)
Jules :) |
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| Reviewed by Dolores Dawes |
9/26/2003 |
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| Well written Patsy! Your description of "Grief" was very vivid to the imagination. I think you captured the essence of "Grief!" |
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
9/11/2003 |
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| well done |
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