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| Reviewed by Ken Chartrand |
1/16/2009 |
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| Hello Patsy, I read your Poem,"Breath of God". I found the imagery fantastic! The story it tells is joyous in that one can almost feel God's breath in it . Well done. PLease feel free to visit my site here in the "Den". |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
7/21/2008 |
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| We are all holding memories of good life in our hearts. To express them in poetry is good, let the breath of God take you forward in yur life with the memories not to be left behind but put forward to others too. Writing from your heart is all that is required and os many good memories are to be shared here on the den by us all. Thanks for this uplifting write, a good one to ponder over too. |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
7/10/2008 |
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Very well written.
Yes, you shall write again!
GOD Bless You,
JMD |
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| Reviewed by Eddie Thompson |
2/15/2004 |
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| A most excellent poem homegirl...You truly have the gift of poesy...i sense much depth in your walk with God in your poems. |
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed |
2/12/2004 |
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This proves that there is ALWAYS a second wind--that wind is the breath of the Holy Spirit, whether we acknowledge it or not. Also teaches that the only writer's block that exists is only a detour to a greater inspiration in disguise.
Appreciated this Sis,
blessin's,
cynth'ya lewis reed |
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| Reviewed by Mary Quire |
10/26/2003 |
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| This is so beautiful and true. For it is only by the breath of God...thank you for sharing this one. |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
10/25/2003 |
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| Excellent write....BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
10/23/2003 |
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Inspirational write, Patsy. The power is infinite within the breath of the Creator to inspire us all.
Amor |
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| Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen |
10/23/2003 |
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Lovely, Patsy! Couldn't agree more!
Jules :) |
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| Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa |
10/23/2003 |
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| Good job, wonderful inspirational piece. |
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