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You're too busy for love.
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Garrett L Diamond
Thursday, March 20, 2003
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You're too busy for my lips on yours so there will be no kissing for you. Much too busy for my hands through your hair, she is too busy with tryouts and massages. Too busy to be alone and so she said. Too busy for my words in your ears, too busy with you. Too busy to talk on the phone again email that's New York City for you, email me. Too busy, or too busy stuck somewhere too busy for hope too busy for me.
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| Reviewed by Vesna TwinFlameunion |
6/15/2005 |
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Damn ..this is good!
vesna* |
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| Reviewed by Donni-Jay De-Ville |
1/6/2004 |
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| The 'busyness' got through really well! If anyone's that busy, they're going to miss out! |
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| Reviewed by serenety L |
6/16/2003 |
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| That's a sad poem, though a wonderful write. Hope she soon realizes what she's missing. S. |
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| Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) |
4/13/2003 |
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| Very sad ... good job. Teresa |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg |
3/20/2003 |
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| Excellent, poem. |
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| Reviewed by Erica Ivory |
3/20/2003 |
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| Sounds... like a rushed life.. This seems so sad.. Woder if people know what they are missing.. Well done! |
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