So long, my friend ...
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paul yogi nipperess
Tuesday, December 28, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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So long, my friend ... it has been
a lot of fun, but now it's time to part.
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So long my friend .....
Monty, for a few months now,
You have survived on borrowed time.
Good friends and modern surgery
Helped to extend your life.
But, that does not make it easier,
Now that the time has come,
To say goodbye and thanks my friend.
Sorry, but my heart has come undone.
Looking back, there were no complaints,
Not ever, at any time.
Instead, just gentle love and understanding
For your own and immediate family.
And woe betide the stranger,
Arriving unannounced at our door.
Your welcome gave us plenty of warning,
As you danced around the floor.
On the farm, or in the bush,
Or even on the beach,
Comments like, "You cut a handsome figure",
Were made by all we meet.
Snakes in the garden or birds on the aerial,
None of them stood a chance,
Greeted by your warning growl
And your proudest prance.
On guard in your own territory,
Proud tail flying high,
No rock, nor butterfly, nor blade of grass
Escaped your eagle eye.
Even today your fight was real,
Right to the very end.
You did not close your eyes at all,
... did you know, you would never mend?
And, so it is today my friend,
We come to the end of a long and happy road.
No more surgery, no more pain,
Just broken hearts, for those you leave alone.
R.I.P Monty
German Shepherd - a watchdog, loved by all.
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| Reviewed by Shay White |
9/16/2009 |
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| Your friend was a lucky person indeed to have someone love him enough to dedicate such a tribute. Thank you for sharing your heart and your pain. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Devenish |
12/6/2006 |
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| I like your poem. Who would want to live in pain? Best wishes Joyce |
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
9/17/2006 |
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Very nice poem. You have a typo you might want to fix. Here:
Looking back, there was no complaints, (there were no complaints)
but all in all, good job. |
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| Reviewed by J M |
1/11/2006 |
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| A tribute of beauty and friendship well done. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
7/18/2005 |
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| Beautiful tribute that speaks loudly of your love. |
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| Reviewed by Scott Franklin |
7/13/2005 |
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Great tribute to our unconditional friends.
Scott |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/7/2005 |
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| A most heartfelt and moving tribute, Paul. Thank you for sharing it. Love, peace, and strength to you. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
3/20/2005 |
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| great tribute...BHUWAN!!! |
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| Reviewed by High Country Girl |
2/12/2005 |
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Oh Not you too, My heart goes out to you. They are the mostest of Doggies, Had one for 13 years, and she went two years ago, still miss her, so this is soooo relative to my own heart, and I might add a darn good write at that.
My Condolences to you and family
They are like children arent they!
Hugs
Ch'erie |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
12/28/2004 |
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| a very beautiful tribute ... |
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| Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader) |
12/28/2004 |
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So beautifully heartfelt, thanks for sharing your innermost - if he was your friend, he obviously had a wonderful life.
Monette |
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| Reviewed by Monika Arnett |
12/28/2004 |
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| His awesome spirit will live on and those memories are etched upon your heart, and within those ones who cherished him. Goodbye to his physical presence; but those memories of his spirit shall live on! Treasure them and pass them along in your stories during moments you share. Embracing you and yours with compassion. |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
12/28/2004 |
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| this is special and he obviously was too |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
12/28/2004 |
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A wonderful tribute to your magnificent and noble canine friend; and I know your pain all too well.
May Monty's spirit always live on in your heart and soul. |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
12/28/2004 |
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| I know very well the feeling behind this my own special one left in 2001 but we always miss them a wondeful tribute. |
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| Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga |
12/28/2004 |
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Dear Paul,
My heart bleeds my tears roll. It is an extremely sad time when one loses a beloved friend. May your heartache heal when you remember the good times. God bless.
warm hugs
Elga |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
12/28/2004 |
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Oh No!!!!
I am so - so sorry to read this...with a clamping feeling in my chest..to scare to read further tears started to roll down my face...but I did read it all...and All I can say tears are flowing freely now!!
Know that I feel the pain with you my dearest friend!!
May Monty rest in peace...BIG HUG OKAY!!
Love Tinka |
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