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Unlucky by Mistress Nataku Friday, August 29, 2003 Share Print Save Become a Fan
I am forever unlucky A klutz Who doesn't understand anything Why, I ask you? Why do you love me? I'm a pathetic crybaby Who doesn't even know what love is I've broken your heart And you still wish for my love Why? What do I possess? I don't understand But then again Nothing makes sense to me I am time's prisoner Time that plays with my heart But if you wish I will try my hardest To charm time And have time Let me love you For now I can promise nothing Except an undying friendship But the thought of you with another Makes my heart ache So there is hope Forever there is hope If you wish to waste your time On a fool Who is forever unlucky

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Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic	1/18/2004

Forever there is hope ..indeed there is..poignant line..love it!! Vesna smile




Reviewed by na na (Reader)	8/31/2003

Mistress ... join the crowd ... I am a fool to love also. A big fool! Good poetry. Bill Murray




Reviewed by Sandie Angel	8/29/2003

Good write!... To love is to be stupid. To be stupid is to be a fool once. To be a fool is to be at a place where bigger fools are wiser. Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)