hard -- LaBelle's Challenge Assayed
by john k zimmerman
Thursday, November 06, 2003
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well, somedays you can
and somedays . . . |
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I tried to write something
saucy and hot to answer
your challenge, Crimson Lady,
something with falling shifts,
and groaning strokes, the
new, old ritual pre planned
or coming unlooked for.
I tried but naught took flight
above the tediously carnal
to the realms of sensuality by
your challenge called forth.
Though the situation looks rather grave
I should say that I, at the office, gave
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| Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick |
11/14/2003 |
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| :-) |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/7/2003 |
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| Funny! Thank you for sharing. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
11/7/2003 |
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| HA!! This is priceless, John. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
11/7/2003 |
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| HA! HA! Office charity. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
11/6/2003 |
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Giggling here...enjoyed it!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
11/6/2003 |
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| LOL loved the ending! :-) |
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
11/6/2003 |
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i hate the "block"
death to the "block" |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
11/6/2003 |
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| Laughing, laughing, I am , John! Great write. |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
11/6/2003 |
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| The giving at the office makes for a saucy thought! Lisa |
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