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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
4/3/2011 |
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A sad and haunting feel to this beautiful poem, William.
love and hugs, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
4/3/2011 |
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A classic feel to this poem, William. I wonder if we all don't end up this way, having lost, but risked it. We all have that one that got away, or worse, a situation more tragic. Love and hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
4/2/2011 |
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| Sad and beautiful. From the mists of time ,, memories remain...M |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
4/1/2011 |
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Sad but hauntingly beautiful, William! Guess we've all been there at least once in our lifetime.....
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
3/29/2011 |
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William, this is so beautifully touching but oh so sad. Remember we all only go this way once, so one must make the best of it.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
3/29/2011 |
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THANK GOD THE MEMORIES ARE OF 'LAUGHTER'... BITTER AND SWEET...A ENJOYABLE MIXTURE THAT IS APPRECIATED...IN MELENCHOLY TIMES. LOVELY WORK, WILLIAM...THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
3/29/2011 |
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| Beautiful writing sweet man...Hugsss |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
3/29/2011 |
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| well expressed |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
3/29/2011 |
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Sometimes, all you need is the laughter, the rest is just fodder for the soul. Well done William, well done.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
3/29/2011 |
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Beautiful poem, William! Bittersweet...
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/29/2011 |
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A bitter sweet way to look at life but expressed with honesty and truth, not sure if this is your personal experience but if so I know you will find a new song and add the old to the songbook of your heart.
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
3/28/2011 |
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| I relate to this, Bill...more than I can express...e |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
3/28/2011 |
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William, lost love recaptured perhaps
in these painful lines. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
3/28/2011 |
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William,
i think love is still there, too,
even if it's unfilfilled; there's such
longing and tenderness of expression
in these lines.
Very fine indeed.
John |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
3/28/2011 |
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Only the laughter lasts? Love never wanes.
Peace
Tony |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
3/28/2011 |
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Life's roll-a-coaster.
Indeed, it is part of the human condition. Many go wrong by making adverse choices when they're down or their partner is... |
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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
3/28/2011 |
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These feelings come and go in life...part of our human condition...beautifully and evocatively expressed...
Best wishes, Diana... |
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| Reviewed by Regina Pounds |
3/28/2011 |
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d'Artagnan, such a loss can bring sadness again and again...I can empathize.
hugs,
Gina |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
3/28/2011 |
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I know we have felt this along our life trails William.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/28/2011 |
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This is a sadly common theme in this life/world, William. I am sure many can relate. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
3/28/2011 |
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| Bitter sweet memories |
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