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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
4/20/2012 |
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Heck, how dreadful!!!
I just hope our police never bear arms, other than the truncheon. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
4/12/2012 |
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An intimate witness to the pain, William, encompassing such wisdom.
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
4/10/2012 |
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| A TRAVESTY...AND STILL IT GOES ON. I AM WAITING FOR THE FINALITY AND PRAYING. THANKS FOR SHARING, WILLIAM AND GOD BLESS YOU. LOVE AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by pat medlin |
4/10/2012 |
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| a riveting heart-wrenching write william...it does just what poetry is meant to do...brings strong emotions of one kind or another straight to the surface |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
4/10/2012 |
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| profound and stirring write-exploring both sides of a tragic loss |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/10/2012 |
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| i remember this unfortunate occurrence ... it caused much turmoil in the city ... getting shot in your vestibule of your abode while trying to pull out your wallet is abhorrent ... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/8/2012 |
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| Such sadness to live with,my heart goes out to the family,still! Superbly written poem,William! Good to see you posting again!;-) |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
4/8/2012 |
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William,
you deliver this with grace and dignity
and admirable control
john |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
4/8/2012 |
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No Ed
I WAS NOT ONE OF THOSE POOR SOULS....
I WAS RETIRED TWENTY SOME YEARS WHEN THIS NIGHTMARE OCCURRED
PEACE BE WITH YOU BROTHER
WILLIAM |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
4/8/2012 |
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This rings of police targeting and killing the wrong man and then covering up. So commonplace in America that it has become an epidemic.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
4/8/2012 |
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| Seems I remember something about this type of situation...I dearly hope u were NOT one of the young officers at the time...what a memory to have to think about...e |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
4/8/2012 |
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Very sad story...but so very eloquently penned...nicely done, William...
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
4/8/2012 |
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William what a poem written so well I can almost hear the heartbeats. Stellar poetry have misses you much.
Peace love and light
Amber |
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