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The Gods Punishment
~~~*~~~
There's a thought
of a glorious image
embe ded
deep in my mind
of you
As you blest my vision
the last time
I saw you watching me
walk away.
now the gods
punishes me
for I am unable
to create
A song , An ode, A sonnet
A word, A line, A verse.
They have punished me
by drying my inkwell
Relieving me
Of my quill
Castrating my ability
to create images
upon the virgin parchment
Before me.
By: William Bonilla
D'Artagnan
12/13/2011
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
5/24/2012 |
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HMMM...I DON'T KNOW, WILLIAM. NOT A TIME OF REST, CONTEMPLATION... REFILLING OR RENEWAL? BUT OF PUNISHMENT?!! WE MUSTN'T EVER FORGET; WE ARE 'HIS' INSTRUMENT, NOT THE OTHER WAY AROUND...WE HAVE TO WAIT. BUT I GUESS EACH POET LOOKS AT IT DIFFERENTLY, HOWEVER...I AM GLAD TO NOTE THAT IT WAS A WHILE AGO THAT YOU WROTE THIS AND I TODAY I READ 'SHE CONFESSED'. WELCOME BACK!!!!! LOVE YA! MANY BLESSINGS AND MUCH FAITH TO YOU AND YOURS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
5/10/2012 |
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| Given time, I am sure ur image will be created & such an image it will be...maybe its the virgin part u r having trouble with...? ;-)e |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
5/10/2012 |
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Your muse is gone? I don't think so, because this poem surely speaks to everyone. I see however, that you wrote it last year.
Let's do a collab soon. Much peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
5/10/2012 |
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| i know the feeling--i have felt the same after my sister's passing |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
5/10/2012 |
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Judging by the way you penned this one, William, you're not being punished at all! Great writing!!!!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/10/2012 |
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certainly an interesting way of
looking at it, William, and unusual, too.
i like it a lot
john |
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