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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
6/1/2012 |
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;( this pulls at my heart...
"We shared the same foxhole
Fought the same battles
The same enemy."
this made me pull out the tissues
this in itself is a bond of steel
raw emotions are shared here
Thank You for sharing this William
and as for coming home, I Am Sorry
it is just triffling when people attack
out of their own ignorances...we can't
help others who are self rightious &
you can bet your bottom ass dollar
they are cowards....
Love & Honor For You & "HIM"
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Shirley Houston |
5/31/2012 |
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| My God, this is so deep! Essential truths must be shared for healing to be effective. Thank God for "Him" and thank you! |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
5/29/2012 |
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Powerful!!!!! *William*
Gripping testimonial!!!
"He" is still....Love!!!
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
5/29/2012 |
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A new marriage marks the beginning of a new life. A life for imaginary friends aren't needed anymore. A brilliant idea and a new twist to the problem of reentering society after war.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/28/2012 |
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Your verses awaken much thought and emotion, William. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
5/28/2012 |
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Truly heartfelt and touching poetry, William....
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
5/28/2012 |
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| DEAR WILLIAM...'HE' WAS WITH YOU LONG BEFORE YOUR WEDDING DAY AND 'HE' WILL BE WITH YOU THROUGHOUT ALL ETERNITY. THERE IS NOTHING IMAGINARY ABOUT 'HIM'...YOU CANNOT BURY 'HIM' FOR HE WAS BURIED ONCE AND HAS RISEN! 'HE' IS REAL AND WILL NEVER CEASE TO LOVE YOU AND ONE DAY YOU WILL SEE 'HIM', FACE TO FACE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
5/28/2012 |
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| A memorial write to your friend on Memorial Day...fitting...e |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/28/2012 |
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Strong and emotion packed Williem...
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
5/28/2012 |
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Wow! a wonderful and poignant write!
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
5/28/2012 |
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William
Heartstopping poetry! This poem grabbed me and held me tight. Amazing, I know you wrote it in 07 but it is still mainstream...
Wonderful post for today! Happy Memorial Day, my dear man.
Peace, love and light,
Amber |
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