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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/2/2006 |
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Gorgeously imaged and written, beautiful!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
6/2/2006 |
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Never live life on ones hands and knees. Gotta walk ten feet tall, knowing your worth.
Great rhythmic flow... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/1/2006 |
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You are a wordsmith with a true flair for all things poetic Susan!
An exceptional poem the theme expertly covered, superb form!
love,
eT |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
6/1/2006 |
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Ahhh
such is womans fate, when she trust a man
out of lessons......came this masterful poetry
here's wishing you continued intelligent writes, with happier themes
pax A
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/1/2006 |
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I can relate to much of the sentiments expressed within your poem, Susan. I respect also the workmanship of rhyme and rhythm that give a flow to your offering. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/1/2006 |
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| A great poem to send me into the twilight zone as I lay down for a nights sleep. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/1/2006 |
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This is fantastic and magical yet also hauntingly sad. I love it Susan and the grace that this woman character portrays with the voice of your words. Great stuff.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Close Mills |
6/1/2006 |
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| This is so beautiful. Great job Susan. Michelle |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/1/2006 |
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This one is real. Why do I keep thinking of soiled (soyled) clouds?
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Martin Hebert |
6/1/2006 |
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~~Susan~~i'll tell ya what,no hell in this poem..wonderful,as always~
~~martin~~ |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
6/1/2006 |
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| Gotta watch those doilied one's with all that bric-a-brac lacing around the edges. Loved the mood and tone and premise of this well-done poem, Susan. It has that woe-is-me-get-that-cloud-away-from-my-head style, but then . . . but then . . . it got righteous and lifted that head from those knees wet from bawling all damn night. Yes! This one took. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
6/1/2006 |
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Susan
It's good to keep our heads up in those clouds.....:)
We might just must meet a fellow traveller...
Love and Light
Peter |
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