|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Gorgeously imaged and written, beautiful!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Never live life on ones hands and knees. Gotta walk ten feet tall, knowing your worth.
Great rhythmic flow...
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You are a wordsmith with a true flair for all things poetic Susan!
An exceptional poem the theme expertly covered, superb form!
|Reviewed by A PAX
such is womans fate, when she trust a man
out of lessons......came this masterful poetry
here's wishing you continued intelligent writes, with happier themes
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I can relate to much of the sentiments expressed within your poem, Susan. I respect also the workmanship of rhyme and rhythm that give a flow to your offering. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|A great poem to send me into the twilight zone as I lay down for a nights sleep.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|This is fantastic and magical yet also hauntingly sad. I love it Susan and the grace that this woman character portrays with the voice of your words. Great stuff.
|Reviewed by Michelle Close Mills
|This is so beautiful. Great job Susan. Michelle|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|This one is real. Why do I keep thinking of soiled (soyled) clouds?
|Reviewed by Martin Hebert
|~~Susan~~i'll tell ya what,no hell in this poem..wonderful,as always~
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Gotta watch those doilied one's with all that bric-a-brac lacing around the edges. Loved the mood and tone and premise of this well-done poem, Susan. It has that woe-is-me-get-that-cloud-away-from-my-head style, but then . . . but then . . . it got righteous and lifted that head from those knees wet from bawling all damn night. Yes! This one took.|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
It's good to keep our heads up in those clouds.....:)
We might just must meet a fellow traveller...
Love and Light