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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
11/9/2010 |
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Taylor...
Thank you for the kind words. I miss you and YES!! I have arrived home and the landing was divine!
Susan |
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| Reviewed by . ignis |
10/24/2010 |
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| Wonderful. And No. |
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| Reviewed by Taylor Ryan |
3/26/2010 |
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I haven't had the fortune of reading or writing much of anything barring a snippet here and there that I share with a special soneone. This is special Susan. It speaks only too well to life and what can happen to a relationship left untended, and not always by the gardener who only wished to reap the fruits. Instead, the tender must deal with the return of an untrustworthy seed risking the heart, if dared.
So wonderful to read you again. Have you yet made that journey back to your beloved Savannah on a more permanent basis?
~Taylor |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
3/22/2010 |
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Susan, Such wonderful work here. I loved how I just wanted to keep on reading what you have written..It flows so beautifully and it is filled with passionate offerings..Very well done, my friend!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/21/2010 |
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| Susan, I love the rhyme and rhythm in this gem! Superb love poem! ET |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
3/21/2010 |
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You bloody well not worry... unless... you are older and richer. Put your soul in this one.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
3/21/2010 |
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Watch me bleed
or cause me to bleed -
Anothers true intentions are
often hidden in this world. At
one time or another we can all become
victims of anothers guiles.
"Sweet mystery who speaks to me"
"sing me into heaven"
I love these lines ...
Excellent Belle ...
richard
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
3/21/2010 |
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I like the way your heart beats in each poetic line and how in sadness at the end it's left to die.
George |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/21/2010 |
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Nicely done with lots of feeling and heart...
fee |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) |
3/21/2010 |
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| Beautiful words and understood. |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
3/21/2010 |
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| well said |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
3/21/2010 |
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| One of your best. 'Nuff said. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
3/21/2010 |
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Hi Susan:
I love this write. Very well done!!
Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
3/21/2010 |
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| very well written work-i enjoyed it! |
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
3/21/2010 |
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| Powerful writing, Susan |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/21/2010 |
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Wonderful write, Susan, and the piccy is gorgeous! Well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. ;D |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
3/21/2010 |
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| Excellent write, Susan. May God bless. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
3/20/2010 |
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| I think it's what we make of it. Beautiful poetry Susan. Really nice! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/20/2010 |
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Can you rock me into midnight
Hold me tightly while I sleep
Or sing me into heaven
I love these verses and the passion inspiring the whole poem, Susan. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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