I Could Love You
by J. G. Pajot
Friday, February 29, 2008
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I could love you,
If I thought you felt the same.
I could love you,
With never a feeling of shame.
I could love you,
Forever through the veil of eternity.
I could love you,
If only I thought that you could love me.
I could love you,
Unfettered by any foolish pride.
I could love you,
If it was not something I felt I must hide.
I could love you,
With a depth you can never fully know.
I could love you,
But it is not my place to show.
So I won't love you,
I'll tell my self this is true .
I won't love you,
And I say that now to you...
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
12/16/2008 |
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A very powerful poem you have written.I like reading it,take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Jennifer Christian |
7/24/2008 |
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| That's a good one, James. Makes me laugh at the end. ~ Jennifer Butler |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/7/2008 |
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I tried to tell that to my ex wife. I guess my idea of love is different from hers. I love her still and I always will. You just "validated" my sentiments with your verses. Thank you, my friend. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
3/3/2008 |
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| Oh but you probably will for the heart seems to have a mind of its own. Beautiful pen. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/2/2008 |
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Well done James!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Maria Lena |
3/1/2008 |
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Wonderful! thanks for sharing...
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| Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle |
3/1/2008 |
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I love your ability to share your viewpoint and get straight to the point, at that.
Thank you, Jim, for sharing this poem.
Jill |
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| Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner |
2/29/2008 |
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| Beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/29/2008 |
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Powerfully penned poignancy, Jim, very well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Carin Spirit |
2/29/2008 |
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| This is beautiful, you must share this with your love. If it isn't to be, at least you will know you didn't miss out on the love of your life. Thank you for sharing. Carin' |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
2/29/2008 |
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Poignant write, James; bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :) |
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