Move to Strike!
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Tuesday, September 21, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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With the word as sword,
I move to strike,
send evil on a hike.
Chop down the evil one,
chop up the son of no sun.
Beat him with the holy cross,
give the demon a gigantic toss.
go on, get alone!
Your services are no longer needed,
your throne is broken and defeated.
Fools follow your path,
wise men ignore your wrath.
In these words I banish you,
don't forget to take your evil crew.
Your exploits are now vaporized,
there's nothing else to be compromised.
You are through,
so is your evil boo.
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|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
If there were ever powerful words to send him on his way, and make him look forward to his trip, then Grady, you most certainly have delivered them so masterfully in your excellent poem. Thank you for sharing.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Powerful write Grady!!
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Good for you! This was excellent, love your strong spirit and strength here!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Love it G! You know how to banish the evil one!
You are a good protector!;-) thank you! Great write!
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Hi, Grady. :) After a couple disturbing pieces on humanities uglier side, I knew I could count on you as a rallying voice of hope, faith in self and compassion. Thank you. It seems the more I learn of souls and beyonds and eternity, the more I wonder why we are here, on earth. I love it here, just wonder why...
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Strong sentiment makes these verses vibrate. Love and peace, Grady. Regis|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|You just get better and better! I love this.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
the Word is stronger than any two edged sword--powerful write, thank you for the needed lift! strong spirit you have--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|I like your spunk, dude! Keep up the great write and 'tude! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend/fan in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D