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Tied Tongue by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper Tuesday, August 11, 2009 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan Some reviews have a tied tongue effect, but basically it's an out right reject.

They show up and read They either misunderstand what they read or don't like it period Then they leave a tied tongue review part good and part worse they don't like your verse Actually they should just be honest or leave no review at all So much for the smoke screen true feelings can be seen They should untie that tongue the rope has already hung As the poet dangles his feet kicks from the choke but his pen doesn't miss a stroke This is just another day in the den Surely it will happen again opg

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Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks	8/15/2009

"leave a tied tongue review part good and part worse they don't like your verse" For those, you should have a good laugh, Grady. Thank God you don't get discouraged...we need your "messages"! Blessings and Love - Micke




Reviewed by Karen Palumbo	8/12/2009

How sad, but sometimes we do have to deal with the good and the bad, don't we? Unfortunately yes, it probably will happen again and I am sorry.... Be always safe, Karen




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	8/12/2009

I love your writing style, Gem; keep up the great work, my friend! Well done; bravo! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D




Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart	8/12/2009

I think you're right! Yes it will happen again but sometimes our words do mean something positive to someone and even if they never do they have given our souls a voice. I enjoyed the poem very much Grady.




Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK	8/11/2009

Hey One Poet--I Don't Write To Get Approvals Of Reviews,i.e. I Write For Me,Your Our Little Children And (God)... Those With Enough INTELLECT Will Either Comment Or Pass On By! Even You Read My Stuff And Don't Always Review As I Read UR Stuff And Don't Always Review!! I Suggest Write For UR SELF!And Keep Em Comen Right On!! TRASK...




Reviewed by Joyce Bell	8/11/2009

TAKE IT ALL IN STRIDE...SURELY YOU AND YOUR PEN ARE BIGGER THAN ANY REVIEW THAT YOU FEEL WAS NEGATIVE. GOOD WRITE AND THANKS FOR SHARING. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS