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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
11/11/2012 |
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absolutely a joy to read
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
7/12/2012 |
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| This is quite a telling tale. I like what Janna Hill said: "build it & she will come" because your closing line, "And designed for me", is exactly the formula that sums up your literary sketch here of the locked black box becoming musical. For me this is way more beautiful than cute; it says a great deal to me. ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Shirley Houston |
5/13/2012 |
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| Only "she" will ever open the box so well guarded! Love this one; and totally relating! |
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| Reviewed by Layla Thomas |
1/22/2012 |
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| yes, like a musical box I can imagine it well. "it's a small world after all" is the tune the one I wound up this afternoon. I sometimes imagine though that i am the little plastic ballerina resting up on top of a small spring, so easily removed by innocent little hands...lovely. spirited write here Andy. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/10/2011 |
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Sweet write, Andy... ...it took me a long while but I think I've found the one. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
10/9/2011 |
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A sweet poem, Andy. Enjoyed.
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/7/2011 |
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| VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Marguerite Little Flower |
10/6/2011 |
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| I would say - life is within the box - The outter part of the box will die and return to the earth from which it came but the life in the box will return to the Heaven from which it came. Be a little flower in the Kingdom of God's Garden. Marguerite Little Flower |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
10/5/2011 |
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| whimsy and a jingle Andy -- it's marvelously entertaining -- you were thinking outside of the box on this one -- I bid you love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
10/4/2011 |
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Like Jack in a box...it will pop..just wait you will see~
smiles,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Janna Hill |
10/4/2011 |
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Awww. Box of Dreams - build it & she will come..
:) Janna |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
10/3/2011 |
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But the music box plays on!
Love's Song, just a new verse
for Your poem to live on!!
Play It ~Andy~
Lady Vivian
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
10/3/2011 |
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Sweet high-spirited rhythm to this little whimsical gem!
Love,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
10/3/2011 |
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Cute...lively write! How you must have danced when she set you free!!!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/3/2011 |
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My love is like
A musical box
Wow, keep on playin music!
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
10/2/2011 |
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A fine way of putting it, Andy.
Yes!
John |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
10/2/2011 |
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| A rarity, to find the one with the key. Hold tightly to it. Lovely piece! ~Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle |
10/2/2011 |
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This is awesome Andy and well written. Thanks.
With Love,
Cindy |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
10/2/2011 |
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A heartfelt poem well done so wonderfully indeed Laura
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
10/2/2011 |
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| IT ALWAYS AMAZES ME...THOSE WONDERFUL INSTRUMENTS THAT GOD WILL USE TO SET US FREE FROM ONE THING OR ANOTHER. PRAISE BE HIS HOLY NAME! THANKS FOR SHARING ANDY AND ENJOY YOUR LOVED FILLED BOX. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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