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You Into Me . . .
by Sara Coslett
Friday, November 27, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.

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What thanks scented the acrid air,

Hanging ‘round after not floating

Up the flue, in the hours before

The embers energy died off --

Smoldering and snuffed out.

Yeah! Two things I know best.

Losing the scent, flipping through

On Demand. As if I could

Bring you on, with mindless inferiority.

Good god, how many channels

Does it take, to escape reality?

You are still here, voraciously,

Embedding YOU into me.

Graphic art: PACMAN by pace 067. Lovely image of a big, little bite.

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Reviewed by Michelle Mead	11/30/2009

Love it, Sara- so well-written. To my favorites it goes.




Reviewed by Felix Perry	11/29/2009

Intense Sara and the lonliness is evident and painful. fee




Reviewed by TONY NERONE	11/29/2009

You write so sadly, Sara. If you hurt and to my eyes that is what I read, I am going to pray for you very hard. Stay sweet. GOD BLESS Tony




Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle	11/29/2009

Excellent poem Great work,take care




Reviewed by Regis Auffray	11/28/2009

Truly some people can do this to one's self and existence; they are addictive. Powerfully meaningful, Sara. Love and best wishes, Regis




Reviewed by Darryn Murphy	11/28/2009

Great poem




Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner	11/28/2009

This is stunning poetry, Sara, the need is clearly embedded in these lines - well done. (((HUGS))) and love, karla.




Reviewed by m j hollingshead	11/28/2009

thought provoking




Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)	11/27/2009

Powerful decription describing the pangs of obsession, the process by which the over-ride button sweeps away all other thoughts besides the ONE. There is no white-knuckle escape, it seems, which has any lasting value other than "temporary." It runs deeper than that. One has to really drill down to get to the core of it. Great poem.




Reviewed by Mark Lichterman	11/27/2009

Sara, this is an absolutely beautiful poem. You honor me by having me in your list of favorite authors. Thank you; Mark

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