|Reviewed by Barbara Henry
|Extremely novel way to describe the "rat race" of work,Sara. I like it!
It,unfortunately, does not get any better until one decides to "opt out", i.e.,retire. Even retirement can become too busy,especially when one finally gets to do the things one enjoys.
Barbara J Henry
|Reviewed by pat medlin
|what a delightful description of todays way of life for so many of us...pmedlin|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|well said, sara. all work and no play, let alone time for
all things domestic, makes for a very dull grind.
|Reviewed by F William Broome
Tell me about it! I havee a lot of this - eveen a single these days. Well done,interesing to read.
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|it seems more like you need two wives and two stay at home hubbies to help catch up. Great write and I can only hope you find time someday to slow down without having to worry about making up for lost time.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Powerfully, painfully penned, Sara. Well done. Sure have missed you.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|and the wheels on the bus go round and round, round and round, round and round, the wheeels on the bus go round and round......ugh! i know this feeling all too well sara. good to see you pop in again. happy new year.|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|How well you say it, Sara, in these sharp short lines, and you make me ask what's it all about and where's the quality?
It's good to see you posting, it's been a while.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Today's society has created a need for "something" else in a home to replace the traditional "wife" whether that something is a maid, a live in, a relative or just a scheduled union of all hands.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You have very effectively conveyed your theme, Sara; and your point is well made. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Sara, I'm exhausted. As they say, all work and no play...!
This is great but take the day off. -gene.
|Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
|So much of what we write, especially regarding the poetry that we write, is so much a part of ourselves, of what we've allowed our lives to become. This endless circle that you write of, Sara, tells much of what and how you are and, unfortunately, life is so short and yet, what choice is there? What choice do you have?
So true, but so unfortunate.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|vweryt clever write-i think i need a wife as well!|