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| Reviewed by Dark Knight |
8/19/2012 |
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| whoa-this poem is hot-I liked it |
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| Reviewed by Gary Gebert |
11/15/2003 |
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It doesn't matter what you wear, I'll be there. Love it!
Gary |
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| Reviewed by Ian Thorpe |
11/15/2003 |
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I've never found anything sexy about woollens, (except Cashmere maybe)but if you want to slip into something by La Perla or Agent Provocateur I'm sure we will find plenty to entertain us.
love
Ian |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
11/15/2003 |
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| Whoa this is very good! |
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| Reviewed by Oirdheirc Mor (Reader) |
11/14/2003 |
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Hi Sara,
Well be I a gentleman who takes his time, I have just finished the whisky, so its bottoms up ladies.
I think we can dispense with that Argyle sweater; it may come in handy later.
I think a good coating of baby oil would be more appropriate,
And as Robert would say if he was watching that will make the lady respire.
But I think Sara has it right those French ladies sure know a thing or two when they uncover the ingénue,
Oh and the panting and the innocents squeals of delight as something, hits the spot just right. (sorry about that just had to get that in)
Where the hell is that Argyle sweater gone?
Oirdheirc Mor
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
11/14/2003 |
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| well done. very well done |
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
11/14/2003 |
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| "...I'll wrap you in my ingenue..." <--- ooooo Sara.. we poets always hope to take our love of words to a new level, something not done before.. this line blew me away! You may have "borrowed" for this piece.. but I'd say it's all your own, a truly cool write! katy xox. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/14/2003 |
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| There's no need for the whiskey to get frisky with this piece. Well done. |
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| Reviewed by R. Steven Reynolds |
11/14/2003 |
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Whew, whiskey was not what I thinking of tasting as i read this
very nice
Steve |
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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
11/14/2003 |
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| Ed, you are absolutely correct and I have made the change. It is now argyle sweater and not cashmere. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
11/14/2003 |
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| Beautifully written, Sara, and definitely 'frenzied.' But might I suggest an argyle sweater instead of cashmere? |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
11/14/2003 |
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| I love this, the rhyme and flow and the thought of a "Frenzied Frisky" is deliciously humorous and armorous. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
11/14/2003 |
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| Whoopie! And that ain't Goldberg. Hot damn! Mercy, mercy! Let me at 'em! Don't know about anyone else but my temperature shot right on up there with the reading of THIS grabber, |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
11/14/2003 |
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an excellent piece
enjoyed
William |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
11/14/2003 |
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Only You can answer back like this Sara!!
Lol!! You go girl!!
I feel frisssssssssky!!!!!
Love Tinka |
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