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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
8/16/2003 |
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| Wonderful write from a heart that shines ! |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
5/29/2003 |
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Buddy Buddy Buddy. Sometimes we all get lost in this world of ours.
I lost on AD
That not me
I always know
Where I go
On AD not so
Throw it in air
Just get it out my hair
Is this place fair
Oh well
do tell
Just jiving you Buddy. I always know where I'm at or going, even on AD.
Of course if you listen to my wife, she has a different story.
Gem |
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| Reviewed by Jessie Chan (Reader) |
5/28/2003 |
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Good little poem Buddy. I also like the rhymes. Good write!
Jess |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
5/27/2003 |
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Beautiful Buddy, So very lovely,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Sheryll |
5/27/2003 |
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| nice one. i can relate myself to this poem. i am lost now and hope that there's someone to to be there and guide me. |
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| Reviewed by Buddy Angel |
5/27/2003 |
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Honey, I'm not lost with you, because YOU are the sun shining thru.
Love You
Buddy XOXOXO |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
5/27/2003 |
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Hi Honey:
Very well done! I like this a lot!...but why are you lost when you're with me?
Hope this is just fictional.
Love,
Wifie XOXOXOXO |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
5/27/2003 |
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| Nicely done. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/27/2003 |
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| hope you will be rescued; you are in my thoughts and prayers, buddy! compelling little write! (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :) |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
5/27/2003 |
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Buddy,
Oh the rhymes are excellent.
And dont be lost long >
Good write. Peggy |
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