|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Wonderful write from a heart that shines !|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Buddy Buddy Buddy. Sometimes we all get lost in this world of ours.
I lost on AD
That not me
I always know
Where I go
On AD not so
Throw it in air
Just get it out my hair
Is this place fair
Just jiving you Buddy. I always know where I'm at or going, even on AD.
Of course if you listen to my wife, she has a different story.
|Reviewed by Jessie Chan (Reader)
|Good little poem Buddy. I also like the rhymes. Good write!
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Beautiful Buddy, So very lovely,
|Reviewed by Sheryll
|nice one. i can relate myself to this poem. i am lost now and hope that there's someone to to be there and guide me.|
|Reviewed by Buddy Angel
|Honey, I'm not lost with you, because YOU are the sun shining thru.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Very well done! I like this a lot!...but why are you lost when you're with me?
Hope this is just fictional.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|hope you will be rescued; you are in my thoughts and prayers, buddy! compelling little write! (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :)|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Oh the rhymes are excellent.
And dont be lost long >
Good write. Peggy