meatnfruit
by coni lea harris
Monday, March 03, 2003
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I would like take this moment and thank all my reading~friends, Thank you, every one has cheered me on,,thro their words on AD, I have eve nrecieved e-mails, Go for it girl,,fly high. I have everything under control, (so far, I think) so I can get back to my favorite hobby, reading,,I would like to apolize for not commenting on some, I sometimes read, the later comment, keeps the mystery going, huh? Keep the ink flowing,,,Love all of your work, I hope I hav touched someone's life or heart thro' my words,,, cheers, coni lea, |
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you came to my gate
there you stood
I looked into your windows
there wasn’t much there
looks like your basket
needed to be filled
I haven’t much food to offer
said you weren’t hungry anyway
your stomach may be full
but the basket of your soul
sure is empty
I see blood~n~tears
seeping where there
should be none
would you care to tell me how
you receive those wounds
it’s plain to see you’ve done
some battles, were they from a
useless war, was it from those who
said they loved you
but looked at you with
poisoned darts
spoke words from a sword
are they from the beatings
you received
still a few bruises there
looks like you done your share
of falling
I can see the footsteps
on your pride
the remains one would
wipe
on a doormat
I can feel the need
you've a basket to fill
I can only fill it with
meat~n~fruit
of my words
I can’t hold your hand all the
way
but I’ll give you a little
shove in the right direction
if I can
hoping it’s right for you
I won’t pick away
at the bones
of past mistakes
after all I have been
empty many times
the meat of my soul
seared away
vultures butchering away
at the flesh left hanging
to bleed a forever wound
my fruits of my words
tossed to to rot away
I’m surprised I have enough meat
to repair the covering for my bones
I’m surprised my fruit had enough seed
to replenish the sweetness I knew was
buried deep in my heart~n~soul
trying to keep from being spoiled
please don’t equivocate
I can hear it in your voice
I can see it in the windows
leading to your soul
may your basket be filled
hopefully with different point of view
with the
meat~n~fruit
I give you
to fill your basket
to help you along
life’s journey way
“may the house you live in never fall down if you
pity the stranger standing at your gate” Gordon Lightfoot
always be careful when answering the knock at your door, you never
know what soul needs his basket filled, but of course
be aware of the dangers, that are your only reward,
after all you never know what they are there for”
this is where your heart is torn
you want to help someone, but they are there only
to lure others into harm, it’s a tuff decision.
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| Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon |
3/3/2003 |
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| This was so good. ;) Silver |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
3/3/2003 |
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Really a good write of wisdom and inspiration for those who need it and, in these times, there is never a shortage of baskets to fill.
Amor |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/3/2003 |
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| powerful and beautiful write, coni! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :) |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
3/3/2003 |
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This...is a powerful work.
"may your basket be filled
hopefully with different point of view
with the
meat~n~fruit
I give you
to fill your basket
to help you along
life’s journey way"
Generosity of the soul is a special gift. True angels have it. Thank you too for your comments.
~E
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| Reviewed by Oisín Breen |
3/3/2003 |
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| beautiful |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
3/3/2003 |
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Excellent write.
peg |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
3/3/2003 |
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Coni, this poem is a treasure, and I am filled with food from it. You have written
well, and it is so hard to know when to offer nourishment for the body, or for the soul. One is so scared of making a mistake and putting themselves in danger. Loved the poem. You are so sweet. Bill |
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