Admira
by Sandra S Corona
Friday, March 07, 2008
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Imagine trees with human characteristics and a bombshell female tree!
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Admira
When ya go past Breezes Inn, she'll be there and they'll be men
watching every move she makes (make no mistake).
She'll chug-a-lug sweet water (without any chatter)
that's why folks adora Admira.
Her shape is to 'die for' but she won't fit through your door.
She's a sassy sapling with many beaus galore. Everyone loves Admira!When ya go past Breezes Inn, she'll be there and they'll be men
watching every move she makes (make no mistake).
She'll chug-a-lug sweet water (the temp doesn't matter)
that's why folks adora Admira.
Her roots, boughs, unbroken, to none she's betoken,+
that gal wants to live free wherever love is spoken. Everyone loves Admira.
When ya go past Breezes Inn, she'll be there and they'll be men
watching every move she makes (make no mistake).
Chugging down pure water, she'll ask, "What's the matter?"
That's why folks adora Admira.
She's beautiful and green. To break her would be men.
Trees should be adorned in emerald greenery.
Everyone loves Admira.
When ya go past Breezes Inn, she'll be there and they'll be men
watching every move she makes (for heavens sake).
She'll chug-a-lug sweet water (always brings her mother)
that's why folks adora Admira.
She's not a gal to 'park';
flares when you mention 'spark' and splinters easily.
Don't you blokes sap her eternally! Everyone loves Admira.
When ya go past Breezes Inn, she'll be there and they'll be men
watching every move she makes. Admira shakes!
She'll chug-a-lug sweet water--mountain pure is better--
that's why folks adora Admira.
copyright 2001 Sandra S. Corona
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
3/9/2008 |
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| now you're gonna have me looking down through the trees Sandy, anyway great entertaining poetry. hugs |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
3/8/2008 |
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outstanding piece Sandra
Love your art
Peace & love be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/7/2008 |
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Excellent write, Sandy; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/7/2008 |
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Gives a whole new meaning to the term "Hard as an Oak" lol, good one sandy
hugs
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/7/2008 |
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Childlike wonder in these entertaining lines - well done, Sandy!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
3/7/2008 |
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Where did you say this magical forest is???? Seen through eyes of imagination and beauty...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
3/7/2008 |
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I Have enjoyed the reading of "Admira".
Keep posting, Poet.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
3/7/2008 |
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Sure 'n, 'tis many a reason to adora Admira! Limbs of pure grace...poetry in motion...
Thanks, Sandy :o)
Micke |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/7/2008 |
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I've always loved trees but you've given me reason to "look" at them differently from now on, Sandy. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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