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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
12/2/2009 |
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Oh Sandra
if only you knew how much I have sinned
since thanksgiving day, I haven't stopped feeding my face
must have gained at least 10 pounds
what am I to do in my golden years with my fat butt here?????
punish myself and place myself on a diet of "bread & water"????
I wish i could but I am a diabetic.......
Love & peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
12/2/2009 |
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Sandra,
Ah, but who could pass up a hot cinnamon roll, and what's a little fat here and there..more to love. Well done, my friend.
Mary
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
12/2/2009 |
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Sandra,
Clever, apt and witty...you say it well.
John |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/2/2009 |
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Apt and timely and seasonal, Sandy. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
12/2/2009 |
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LOL Too cute, Sandra; well done! Love the drawing! Too funny! LOL
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
12/2/2009 |
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| Yeah, but they're sooooooooooooooo delicious. Cute write, Sandra. |
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