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| Reviewed by Eugene Williams |
10/26/2009 |
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| But you have reached beyond human pale and i thank you good piece of humanities weakest quest for perfection withou knowing why... |
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| Reviewed by Vesna TwinFlameunion |
8/10/2005 |
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You rolled the dice.
You set the stakes.
You opened yourself to me
..fantastic stuff..hey ..your mind enthralls me..
Vesna* |
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| Reviewed by Nickolaus Pacione |
8/24/2004 |
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| I agree with Mark on this one, this one does have a very strong TOOL vibe to it. Your short stories does have it as well, but never really reviewed your poems until now. |
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| Reviewed by ~ Chanti |
8/13/2004 |
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Nicholas you have such a unique style. I love reading your work because it makes me think. I have a feeling you enjoy provoking.
Chanti |
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| Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore |
12/3/2003 |
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| indeed..balance requires both givers and takers... |
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| Reviewed by harry k stammer (Reader) |
7/27/2003 |
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| hey, this is like Tool. ever thought of writing for a rock band? hks |
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| Reviewed by Fawn Caldwell |
7/19/2003 |
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| Unique and unusual...I like your style. |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
6/27/2003 |
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| This is good...really good. Methinks you are not referring to a person here...Very well done! |
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| Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) |
4/24/2003 |
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| OH MY! I liked this! LOL...maybe I'm twisted. Very strong....well done! Teresa |
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| Reviewed by Susannah Carlson |
4/6/2003 |
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Are you my ex-husband?
But seriously, very strong, very stark. Powerful. |
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| Reviewed by anne cunningham |
3/28/2003 |
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| brutal honesty |
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| Reviewed by Josephine Bohen |
3/27/2003 |
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well done
enjoyed
josie |
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| Reviewed by Cora |
3/27/2003 |
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I like the rolling effect of the lines as they tumble one upon the other.
The last 3 lines could be omitted and only retain the refrain:
"I am only the one who takes" |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg |
3/27/2003 |
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Excellent write.
Peg |
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