Tears Falling
by sonja s lewis
Sunday, May 18, 2003
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Tears falling down my face,
it burns. Close my eyes to take to another place,
don't work.
Tears falling down my face,
hate it.
Close my eyes to take to another place,
can't find it.
Tears falling down my face,
it hurts.
Close my eyes to take to another place,
won't heal.
Tears falling down my face,
see them.
Close my eyes to take to another place,
stop them.
Tears falling down my face,
lose them.
Close my eyes to take to another place,
they're gone.
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| Reviewed by Peace Poet |
6/11/2003 |
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| A great poem indeed! |
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| Reviewed by Brittany Renée |
5/18/2003 |
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G'day to you!
I liked this actually. I enjoyed the sorrowness, but it left me more with the feeling of "Okay, I cried, now I'll get up and be strong and walk away even if I still remember." instead of the typical, "I'm crying. Still crying and won't stop." Liked it, was inspirational!
Lots of Love
*-x Brittany x-* |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
5/18/2003 |
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Good work.
[Last line, 'their' should be 'they're'] |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
5/18/2003 |
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very touching poem, Sonja
Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
5/18/2003 |
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Love hurts! I can tell.
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$ |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
5/18/2003 |
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| Like what I read. |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
5/18/2003 |
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So beautifully sad, Lovely and so touching, I hear what you are saying here,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
5/18/2003 |
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| Oh Sonja. Wish I could help you dear. You are so sweet. God bless you Lady. Bill |
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