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All I Want
by The Bear Paw
Friday, April 17, 2009
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All I want
is your hands
locked in mine
feel my heartbeat
rise at the
tingling of your
breath on my skin
all I want is
to be with you.

 

(c) Carolyn Red Bear, 2009
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Reviewed by Sir Leonardo 8/13/2009
well since i am of Irish background I will see if there be any Leprechauns nearby that will grant your request--you will have to write a poem if true love comes your way this week-great poem by the way
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo 6/15/2009
Seems such a simple request to be with the one who makes your heart beat quicken, yet sometimes it is far from simple and very painful. There is intense emotion in this piece, even in its brevity. Well done! Hugs, Elizabeth
Reviewed by . . 6/11/2009
Failing spirit will not happen with a woman giving such love.
Arrows of love will touch, with love so ripe.
Write with open heart. Love is quiet. This is quiet. This is love.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 5/21/2009
Succinctly expresses much and elicits a response; thank you for sharing, Carolyn. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by kg cummings 4/22/2009
sometimes the best work is said in clear concise words as you have done here. Excellent. Your friend, Kathy
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen 4/19/2009
So short but filled with thought.
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 4/18/2009
What a loving photograph and loving words from your heart to paint the perfect portrait...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 4/18/2009
GORGEOUS, Bear, simply GORGEOUS!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by J'nia Fowler 4/18/2009
Very romantic and pure. Bless you, J'nia
Reviewed by jude forese 4/17/2009
honest passion delightfully expressed ...
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace 4/17/2009
Oh my,so very beautiful..Hugss
Reviewed by Linda Hill 4/17/2009
Bear Paw,
Beautiful romantic verse!

Many Blessings,
~Linda
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 4/17/2009
Gorgeous, Bear, simply lovely work! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 4/17/2009
simply beautiful!
Reviewed by Carol Surber 4/17/2009
Seize the moment...for they pass and disappear in a moment. Lovely Red Bear!
Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER 4/17/2009
Oh God the yearning, how I remember it! Hugs! Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by John Flanagan 4/17/2009
Carolyn,
Both tender and intense, a great blend.
John
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 4/17/2009
Giving...what a tender though, giving a wish is like giving a promise, and the heart flutters like a butterfly in the storm of passion.
Well done, little Bear Paw.

Georg

Reviewed by Ed Matlack 4/17/2009
Sorry but you can't have me, I'm spoken for, if with no one else, theres always Rufuz...LOL, Ed
Reviewed by Carin' Spirit 4/17/2009
hmmmm, me too! Beautiful, thank you for sharing Bear. Warmth and Love to you. Carin
Reviewed by George Carroll 4/17/2009
A lover's soul bared.
Reviewed by L. Figgins 4/17/2009
Longing expressed in seductive concentrated form. I like the passion restrained by circumstance in this write and the almost audible sigh created by that passion. Very nice, Carolyn!!!
Reviewed by Felix Perry 4/17/2009
Like a warm breeze blowing over us on a cool day this one is truly exceptional Carolyn...nicely done.

hugs
fee


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