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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
6/18/2009 |
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Parents aren't the only ones we can point a finger at. Ever notice how many people ask how you are and how things are going when all they want to hear is a few words of platitude while they march time for their turn to talk, which of course will be filled with matters of real importance?
"There's a time to be born and a time... A time to be cynical." And right now it's fun and feeling good.
Thanks for giving me a couple of smiles.
Richard
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/17/2009 |
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Cleverly done, Carolyn. Thanks for sharing. I hope you are happy and well. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by High Country Girl |
4/22/2009 |
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LOLOL...
Ch'erie |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
4/22/2009 |
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| I piss my nights away too, usually every couple hours back to the bathroom...and I know you weren't talkin' 'bout me, its those other two Eds that are the crazy ones...Ed |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
4/22/2009 |
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| Oh my,this is great writing..enjoyed...keep smiling...Hugss |
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| Reviewed by kg cummings |
4/21/2009 |
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| wow, that's it in a nutshell isn't it? don't want to say too much cuz of the brain fry! Excellent piece. Your friend, Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
4/21/2009 |
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| Enjoyed the line you've penned. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
4/20/2009 |
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| awesome and clever write! love it! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/20/2009 |
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Brilliantly executed after what sounds like one very rough week....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
4/20/2009 |
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Carolyn,
Very clever and not just nothing, that's far too modest. Love the end.
John |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
4/20/2009 |
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| Well done Paw |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
4/20/2009 |
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How did I know it was Jersey Ed, before I read your poem, maybe because he didn't have a mustache, is that it? I know it's the grass in his mouth, and the stupid grin, good one Paw! Hugs!
Jasmin Hort |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
4/20/2009 |
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You are too often around my brother jersey Ed, remember that he consorted with that Doc Bonnie of infamous fame, and her fried the little brain he had (Ma said he hadn't any when he born)
When you invite Old Brother Ed for a good warpath dance?
Edvard the Old Brother
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
4/20/2009 |
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But, Bear, you made up for it with this great write.
Write one! -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/20/2009 |
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ROFL! Bear, this is a good'un - well done!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Darryn Murphy |
4/20/2009 |
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| good poem |
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