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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/18/2009 |
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I think you "speak" for many who work in the corporate world, Carolyn. This is well-expressed and meaningful. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
4/27/2009 |
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| This poem is so well contained and as such clearly emphasizes the energy rumbling just beneath the lid of the boiling pressure cooker called life. Well executed. Hugs, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/24/2009 |
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| i empathsize with thid poem quite clearly |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
4/23/2009 |
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| love this write-so well brought together in the end |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/23/2009 |
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Great rant,Bear! I often wonder why so many of us are the concientious ones who do the most and get the least. You
need to be more considerate of yourself !;-)
Love,
ET |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
4/23/2009 |
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| Love the caption, love your poem, love Jackie Chan, love Rush Hours 1, 2, 3 whatever.... But WAR??!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! A good therapeutic write to erase the cares of a work-worn day and exorcise the Corporate Beast! Nice one, Bear! :)) xx |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
4/23/2009 |
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| Oh my,this is great..love this..well done indeed sweet lady...keep smiling ...Hugsss |
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| Reviewed by High Country Girl |
4/22/2009 |
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Whoa up girl lol, that's like rush hour poetry :) most expressive, I started and followed you through at a great pace.
Ty Ch'erie |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
4/22/2009 |
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Carolyn,
Strong, passionate, gutsy writing, all the rightful frustrations so well articulated in a flowing, unbroken outpouring. Maybe it's time to pull the plug. I love this!
John |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/22/2009 |
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At least you're working, Bear, many others aren't or have lost their jobs - be grateful! But I feel your frustrations in these underappreciated, underpaid lines - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
4/22/2009 |
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| All your life you trained for work, and now that you do, you don't want it? I mean Paw come on now, when you lay your head on that last pillow or rock, do you think of work, or all the work you did, who would know a million years from now, when even that pillow and the rock are gone, that in work you shone. You raise some profound questions as always. Hugs! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
4/22/2009 |
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| Keep working, as those of us who do not, appreciate you paying your taxes to keep us in disability, unemployment, SSI, etc...Ed |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/22/2009 |
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I miss working, but I don't. Don't miss the injustice put upon the employees, the favoritism, or ESPECIALLY those who WON'T talk to me in English! GRRRRR!!!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/22/2009 |
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Oh those webs we do continue to weave....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
4/22/2009 |
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Yes, it is frustrating, when I press ENTER...no one is coming! ! ! what's wrong?! when I press HOME nothing happen I am still there! ! ! and now I am afraid of pressing END and it really gonna work and I am too young to kick that damn bucket! ! !
I am going crazy or what???????????????????????
Georg
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
4/22/2009 |
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Bear, if the escape button doesn't work, just unplug the damn thing.
You really captured the frustrations of a go-nowhere job in a don't-give-a-damn corporation. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey |
4/22/2009 |
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Fantastic! Any working person can identify with this, the long hours, traffic, doing the work of three people. You've captured it well my friend.
Mary |
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