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| Reviewed by Jim West |
10/18/2009 |
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| Ahhhhh yes. I've gone through that before. Lesson learned. |
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| Reviewed by ~ H (Reader) |
7/13/2009 |
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| You sound like you are too hard on yourself..I know the feeling, be well, your writing shines! Holly |
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| Reviewed by Goddess Love (Reader) |
6/17/2009 |
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This poem sounds familar, like something my wife would say. It's very well written.
Legacy |
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
6/15/2009 |
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"Friendship Unrequited" tugs at the heart with its soulful insight.
A beautiful piece by a woman who knows the pain of loneliness and feels the love in tenderness.
A glorious presentation.
Richard |
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| Reviewed by Carin' Spirit |
6/8/2009 |
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| A true friend would still be receptive to trying it again! Even if it an apology for a rough reply. Good Luck, but I think a friend is worth the effort. Be Well, Carin' |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
5/25/2009 |
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Sometimes people know what is good for them, but are afraid for one reason or another of it. Love, and friendship can be only words to some and to others a reality but still to some others a thing to be feared because being a friend means commitment from the heart to be there for that person.
Being a friend doesn't just mean hanging out and doing things together that you both like. Being a friend is a lot, lot more. A friend listens, comforts, helps, and shares thngs with you. And this is what some people fear becauseeven though they know it is good to be a friend and have friends, they are afraid of what friendship means.
This is a very deep and poignant write, from a very emotional heart. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your den sister, Barbie |
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| Reviewed by Ray { Not a Poet } |
5/19/2009 |
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Sometimes people are somewhat gun shy after being hurt
Life can be wonderful but it can also be cruel
I think we should all try to take the chance
For if you don't you could miss life's great dance
Sad but wonderfully written
Have a pleasent day
Ray { Not a Poet } |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
5/14/2009 |
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| So heart wrenching, and broken hearts are usually the reason why. but it's not too late to be and have a friend. Deeply touched by your poem Bear Paw. |
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| Reviewed by andrea hale |
5/13/2009 |
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Unfortunately we all suffer from this painful experience at various stages in our lives. It takes two, and to err is human. A true friend will allow for these mistakes and forgive and forget. We all should learn from our observations. Beautifully constructed, a piece straight from the heart.
Thanks for dropping by my den, much appreciated.
Take good care
Best wishes
Andrea
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
5/11/2009 |
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| Oh no, this is so sad. But you realized it and now you won't make that mistake again. Love, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/11/2009 |
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Absolutely wonderful writing, Bear; well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
5/10/2009 |
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| sad, beautiful and thought provoking--well written! |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/10/2009 |
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| True friendship truly is something to be treasured, yet we've probably all done the very same sometime in our lives. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/10/2009 |
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One shouldn't let the eyes blink when friendship are sending the smoke signals, one need to lost just one word to misunderstand the message.
Friendship is a two ways to the deer's freedom.
Wounded Eagle
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
5/9/2009 |
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Friendship is a gift from the Universe, given at the precise moment that it is needed. don't beat yourself up over this, sometimes we are just not paying attention enough. Open up your heart and you will receive the messages that the Universe wants you to hear.
I wish you well,
Much peace, love, and light, my friend,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by H Cruz |
5/9/2009 |
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| Perhaps sorrow has its place, but a true friend understands autonomy; it is not so selfish to need ones time. We all can't be Mother Teresa for the masses 24/7 I'm sure even she had to reflect! |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
5/9/2009 |
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Bear, I've found that it's never too late to revive a friendship.
I like to think that a friend is a friend is a friend. At least,
I hope so. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain |
5/9/2009 |
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A thought-provoking poem, it made me look inside myself too. "Friendship calls...it does not linger... never to return."
But in life, other Friendships knock, and sometimes it returns as it must have forgotten something, like giving you a hug.((((hugs!)))
You've got friends here at AD - all kinds.
Cynthia |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/9/2009 |
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To look back and realize our mistakes and learn from them is a good thing for although we can't always change the past we can avoid repeating it in the future.
great poem for sure Carolyn.
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/9/2009 |
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Honest and deeply moving is the way I find your verses, Carolyn. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you in friendship,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/9/2009 |
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Carolyn,
This applies to many of us, probably all in some context, at some time, the opportunity missed or rejected and then the realization of loss and the guilt. Well well said.
John |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/9/2009 |
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Many will read this, Bear, and realize that they, too, have failed to be a friend. However: in my case, you've succeeded far beyond your wildest dreams. Thank you for being my friend. :) Well penned!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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