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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
7/7/2009 |
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| So very true, but its how one carries it that counts....M |
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
6/13/2009 |
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An astute observation so gracefully shared.
Insightfully profound.
I love your soft lyricism--intellectual yet feminine.
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| Reviewed by Linda Settles |
6/8/2009 |
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| Resisters in any society are the objects of its resentment. Free thinkers usually get stoned, or crucified. You couldn't have said it better. Thanks for sharing. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/8/2009 |
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I appreciate the philosophical perspective that you have presented here within your verses. I agree with you. Love and peace and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by kg cummings |
6/1/2009 |
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| One world order is a frightening concept. I prefer traveling to the beat of my own drum. Excellent piece. Your friend, Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
5/30/2009 |
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There's so much truth in this one. People should be free to choose how they live their own lives. Everyone was born into this world empty handed, and there was no manual in life, so each of us walk in our own paths. It is only courteous that we walk in our own path and not to interfere with others walking theirs.
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
5/29/2009 |
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Excellent write Bear your words are so true
Deep inside I try not to follow Feeblest rule to the "T"
The church and society has planty of them
I consider mysef, my own man
Peace & love Be with you
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
5/28/2009 |
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Well said. Hopefully, the Internet will help us all understand each other better and knowledge will overcome our many stones we carry without thinking.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/27/2009 |
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I truly liked this one, it really falls in line with my own thoughts and feelings on spirituality.
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/27/2009 |
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| Excellent writing Bear,and though we all need to carry our share of the stone,if we all did as we're supposed to it would be much easier for one and all...Love, ET |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
5/27/2009 |
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Truth every word. Nicely done.
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
5/27/2009 |
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| Indeed it is and few are those who learn how to shift its weight, even briefly. A brilliant write. |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
5/27/2009 |
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| A mind which does not question is soon a shrinking mass of unconnected neurons. I very much enjoyed this provocative poem. Thank you, Hugs, J'nia <> < |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
5/27/2009 |
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The only true progress in this world has been made by independent thinkers. The alternative is a scary prospect indeed. A very fine write, Carolyn!
Lin |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
5/26/2009 |
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| i like this very much-so true and well said |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/26/2009 |
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"Society and Religion" two powerful forces that play tug of war with each other.....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/26/2009 |
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Carolyn,
Excellent focus, sustained theme ending in a triumph of writing: "...it's the heavy-weight of the masses."
John |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
5/26/2009 |
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A lot of truth here, Bear, but the fact that you can write
like this makes the stone a bit lighter. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
5/26/2009 |
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| Many interesting thoughts that I hope don't actually hold true...e |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/26/2009 |
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Powerfully penned thought provoker, Bear, very well penned. We don't have to carry the stone - there's One Who will carry it for us, if we'd let Him ...
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
5/26/2009 |
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Darn, and you dared to say such things out loud, One of our greatest sins, for the convienience of convienience, give up that of who we really are, and not live our moment, that spark in space and time, a very great sin indeed, those that had the courage to make their true statement, many were stoned, crucified, burned, or shuned by a cowardly public weren't they? this is a great deep burning write my friend, you have said much, and said it in great style.
Hugs! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/26/2009 |
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Like Sisyphus, the one rolling a big stone uphill to the other side and condemned by Olympus gods to roll it back and front some people will roll uphill their stones beyond their dead.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/26/2009 |
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minds made dependent
no free thinking
individuality not allowed
A very sad state of affairs if we succumb - long live free thinking and individuality. |
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| Reviewed by Ray { Not a Poet } |
5/26/2009 |
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" no free thinking
Individuality not allowed "
I hope individuality is allowed,
For I have always been an odd ball LOL
I like it that way, I'm just me no mask
I enjoyed this write
Odd Ray { Not a Poet }
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| Reviewed by Paul D Berube |
5/26/2009 |
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| Your words do ring true, Bear. Well said. |
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