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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
5/5/2009 |
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A very meaningful poem; and I like the artwork too.
"you can never go back
a reconciliation
of the end of innocence." -
This is so true!
Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
4/30/2009 |
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Love the poem, Bear.
And the lines below ae lines I live by (for better or worse):
you can never go back
a reconciliation
of the end of innocence.
-gene. |
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| Reviewed by Jacqueline Druga-Marchetti |
12/9/2003 |
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| This was very deep, and well written. I love the art and music that sets the mood. Good job. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
10/27/2003 |
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A memorable poem for my library
~Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by richard poor |
10/22/2003 |
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| so very good!!! |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg |
10/20/2003 |
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Bear, this one reaches and traps the soul beautiful
My friend
Stay strong
Peggy |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/13/2003 |
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| A soulful, expressive piece. Nice offering. |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell (author) |
10/13/2003 |
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This makes me think of death and I hope that although I may stand alone for my own 'issues' my ancestors will be there to greet me and lead the way. Wishful thinking maybe but then I'm like that. ;)
JC xoxoxo |
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| Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader) |
10/12/2003 |
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Nobody is ever alone. Just that it often seems to elude us that the fact is true.
Touching poem |
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| Reviewed by Ian Thorpe |
10/12/2003 |
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I enjoyed this poem Carolyn, your spirituality obviously has no room for sentiment.
The message and the cadence of your lines is very Celtic, but your name suggests native american connections (ooer, I'm always nervous about using native American, a friend of mine used to grizze "I'm not native bloody American, I'm Mexican - Apache. But by then she wasd more London.) I'll check out a few more poems and see if there is a clue. |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
10/11/2003 |
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| this was great Carolyn. touching in the soul. i remember when i was a man alone for years. i prayed for a loving mate. finally after the years passed i met my wife. life isn't lonely anymore but it offers a new challenge, making it from day to day repetitious problems, tons of kissing up, chumping down and understanding. I probably won't never be a man alone that is unless death interferes but i tell you this, i travel back to your position of being alone in mind and soul sometimes. There are some things worst than loneliness, like a crazy motherlaw, well a whole crazy inlaw family. Enjoy your loneliness, life is a catch 22 dilemma anyway. hugs G |
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| Reviewed by . ShyPoet1 |
10/10/2003 |
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| You write VERY well! |
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| Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) |
10/9/2003 |
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Chills, chills, chills! Power here lady! (sigh) I loved these lines:
"constant moving shore
of an un-constant life"
You always rip and roar into the things people only give a thought to here and there. Fine fine work! Was a treat to read.
Thank You,
Teresa Emilie
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| Reviewed by Marlene Reid |
10/9/2003 |
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| Hi Carolyn...this is beautiful as always. Thanks for sharing. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
10/9/2003 |
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| This touches deeply! Great write. The music is as huunting as the write. Great combination. |
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
10/9/2003 |
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The thing is,we all are,most though just don't realize it.
Your poem is deep moving and very beautiful.
Best wishes always
from
kay. |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
10/9/2003 |
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Carolyn, your image selection and usage is magnifiicent! Your poetry is presented to us like a rare and precious jewel. Each syllable is gold and every word a precious stone starting with rubies and working
you way through emeralds amd rubys. Love you work Bill |
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| Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy |
10/9/2003 |
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Carolyn, this is compelling and heartbreaking. Wonderfully written, and executed, well phrased and formed. Great Job!
Bobbi |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
10/9/2003 |
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| Caolyn this is so touching....lovely lines and I love the picture...floria |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
10/9/2003 |
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This was so beautiful and haunting, very lovely Bear,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Bob Holt |
10/9/2003 |
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| No, you can never go back. You hopefully keep moving forward and create greater new realities. Another really strong piece, Bear. Very emotional, thanks for sharing. |
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| Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington |
10/8/2003 |
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There is so much depth to your writes. And you have the most excellent music added. I love this piece.
~Jackie~
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| Reviewed by Zenith Elliott |
10/8/2003 |
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| You are never alone...even when you feel alone. This is so powerful it stirs the emotional pot well. Best wishes to you always! ~Z~ |
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| Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader) |
10/8/2003 |
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Amazing depth in your writes red bear!
Justin |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
10/8/2003 |
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I toe
the waters of time
teeter on it's
constant moving shore
of an un-constant life
time has lost
it's meaning
as I stare into
it's nothingness
and realize
I am a woman alone.
Dear Carolyn,
An emotionally deep and powerful write you have presented us here my friend....This one is both insightful and very very realistic write...passion at its very best....excellent.....love n luck....BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Leland Waldrip |
10/8/2003 |
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Anyone with such beauty in their soul as to write this wonderful piece will not be alone for long. Happiness awaits your approach.
BTW, great pic and music too. Best regards,
Leland |
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| Reviewed by Vesna TwinFlameunion |
10/8/2003 |
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..ahhh Bear..this woman that you are is never alone for what you have will be shred soon with the One that will take you into innocence...the hole within the soul being healed with the knowing that you ARE..nothing else is necessary..you suffice...remember that my dear friend...alone?..No sweet friend ..YOU are never ALONE...
Wonderful poem,ty!
Vesna oxoxox
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
10/8/2003 |
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Deeply moving write Carolyn!!
Love& Hugs
Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) |
10/7/2003 |
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| Super write and well done! |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
10/7/2003 |
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Being alone is no fun..
It doesn't always have to be that way.
Great write...... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/7/2003 |
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| Very moving reflective write Bear! This really evokes much thought , great write, love the music and art too!Very effective! |
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| Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa |
10/7/2003 |
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| Deeply moving lines packed with emotions. One with God is majority. |
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| Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan |
10/7/2003 |
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Yes...sadly haunting...
Jenni |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
10/7/2003 |
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Awesome indeed
wonderful
an excellent write
William |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/7/2003 |
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((((bear)))
awesome, beautiful, sadly haunting write--thank you for sharing
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
10/7/2003 |
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| "I toe the waters of time..." So real, so surreal, as well.. On a day when stress takes on an actual shape, this poem has allowed me to celebrate my own brain.. this is the food for the spirit.. though sad, it reminds me that to think and to feel are glorious.. because I can linger with this kind of intellect. This is a beautifully composed and delivered piece, Carolyn. Wonderful! katy xox. |
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| Reviewed by John Bidwell |
10/7/2003 |
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Awesome write.
Such a powerful word, even by itself.
John |
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| Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield |
10/7/2003 |
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This is excellent! I feel what you're saying. I like the music too. But the writing is emotionally powerful! Great job!
- J - |
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
10/7/2003 |
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| very well done |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/7/2003 |
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| Excellent emotions displayed in this write; well done, Bear! Enjoyed much~ (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :( |
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