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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
5/22/2009 |
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Having been a passenger in that SUV, I could, but agree.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/22/2009 |
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Nothing more filled with anguish than the feeling of be lost...
Georg
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
5/21/2009 |
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| you have expressed the feeling of being lost very well! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/21/2009 |
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A calling out to all who have suffered and lost so much of what was a vital part of their lives, sad yet with resolve....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by H Cruz |
5/21/2009 |
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| Well done! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/21/2009 |
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You capture the pain of loss effectively, Jill, very well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain |
5/21/2009 |
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Beautiful melancholy, such loss of love.
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
5/21/2009 |
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| ...so much sadness fills this beauty of a poem. Good to see you Jill :) |
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| Reviewed by Paul D Berube |
5/21/2009 |
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| Beautiful Jill. Love it. |
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| Reviewed by Nate Oakley |
5/21/2009 |
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Hey Jill,
Thanks for welcoming me back here again. It feels good to be back. I see you haven't "lost" your ability to move every aspect of the senses and heart. I'm not surprised, either. This is a wonderful description of the feeling of losing the ultimate love.
Take care of yourself and, on another note -- don't work too hard.
;-)
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| Reviewed by Darryn Murphy |
5/21/2009 |
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| sad poem, i like it |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/21/2009 |
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Sad write, Jill; hope you are okay! You're in my prayers!
(((HUGS)) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :( |
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