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Dark Angel by David Maclellan Saturday, July 31, 2010 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan Maybe one day I will find her

A dark angel, traveling in the light Rebellious, always trying to do right Why have you called now? It's so late Damaged lives and twisted fate My best years without a mate It's twisted fate to get a mate when it's so late! Do I complain? Ungrateful wretch am I From birth some do not love, Even till the day they die Are not the moments I'm living now, The most important in my life? I have the power over now, but not past strife I can see the trees caressed by the breeze I can feel the wind in my hair, and the sun upon my face Her haloed head, her body clothed in lace I love her like no other I love her like a lover I love her

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Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)	8/22/2010

I am having a time trying to clarify whether you wrote for the female angel and yourself, alternately; or just for yourself or her, until the ending when it seems clear that only one is speaking. Aside from my not understanding completely, this writing seems very ethereal and spiritually zealous; I feel the desires are not earthly, anymore, and they are menacing because it has not happened that the two of you are ever together long enough to communicate fully. An elusive and re-occurring divide that taunts you whenever. I hope you find the one who gives this aura and presence, and that you will love each other in never ending bliss.




Reviewed by E T Waldron	8/7/2010

passionate feelings come to life in this gem,David! splendid,poem abd art ...etw




Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart	8/2/2010

Yes, I belive you truly do. Such a beautiful, emotive poem.




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	8/2/2010

I have the power over now, but not past strife And I really hope you do find an angel, in your life




Reviewed by Paul Judges	8/2/2010

I hope you will....very well composed




Reviewed by Amber Moonstone	8/1/2010

David, I too, search for him, the man that I know is out there somewhere. I can feel his energy all the time...One day hopefully soon the Universe will bring him to me... Lovely poem that I can relate to. Peace and love and light Amber




Reviewed by Christine Tsen	8/1/2010

This is a wonderful ethereal poem, and yes, love is timeless and never too late! Blessings, Christine




Reviewed by Christine Alwin	8/1/2010

Stunning from a heart that feels, lucky girl to find you!




Reviewed by m j hollingshead	8/1/2010

poignant write




Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill	8/1/2010

Beautifully written. Anticipation flows from line to line. Peace, Dayvid




Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse	8/1/2010

"Damaged lives and twisted fate" our paths our journey...our travels...our experiences we are all the same I think despite geological locations...your words take me to imagine the "what if's"...and what if she emerged? I have my what if's too...it would be wonderful despite the "damaged lives and twisted fate" Gratefully and Patiently Traveling Vickie




Reviewed by Dawn Anderson	8/1/2010

David, this is so lovely and filled with longing...and I think she will appear, perhaps when you least expect her to.