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Distance
by Morgan B Merriweather

Saturday, November 06, 2010
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The wind slithers through the leaves

 turning up the silver undersides

clearing way for the rain beat parade;

 each gust greets me with a flustered schedule of hello and goodbye.

 

 The anticipation eases with the tumbling street shadows in shades of grey

as my march meanders through the puddles; stagnate with relief.

Will you ever ask me?

 Ask me where I’m going?

 

 I was never one to correctly fold the map; I can’t coordinate those lines,

there has to be latitude, a range,

 a matter of degree in correlation,

 an interpretation of the hemispheres moving between waves.

 

Tempting to follow the dashed treasure trails - - - - -

 or the director's X marked on the set of a martini shot dream.

 

Will you toss to me your imperceptible compass rose?

 

Toss it to me.

Please.

 

 

 

 


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Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd 2/16/2011
There are some lovely poetic images in your poem, Morgan. Laurel
Reviewed by Joyce Bell 11/30/2010
THE DARKEST HOUR REALLY 'IS' JUST BEFORE DAWN, BUT WITH ONE ALREADY TERRIBLY 'WEATHER BEATEN' FROM ALL THAT RAIN ON THEIR PARADE AND NO ONE TO CARE...CONFUSION, COMPOUNDED BY THOSE 'DULL THE EFFECT' MARTINIS, WILL MOST LIKELY SET IN AND TAKE ITS COURSE. ONE WILL NOT TO BE ABLE TO FIGURE OUT WHICH 'WAY IS UP'...'UP' - TO THOSE 'TREASURED', SO DASHED - BUT SURE, 'TRAILS'. THUS, ASKING FOR HELP IS THE RIGHT THING...BEGGING FOR GUIDANCE IS CERTAINLY CORRECT...BUT ONE MUST BE SURE, BE VERY SURE...THEY ARE ASKING THE RIGHT PERSON. FOR ONLY 'HE' HAS THAT IMPERCEPTIBLE COMPASS ROSE THAT CAN TAKE ONE...'THE DISTANCE'. AN EXCELLENT WORK AND A KEEPER. YES...I DO BELIEVE THIS TYPE OF OFFERING IS YOUR FORTE...YOU DO METAPHORS FANTASTICALLY WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH....JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo 11/27/2010
Wonderful use of metaphor in this piece, Morgan. Sometimes we get lost along the way -- that map or compass would certainly come in handy along life's roadways. Nicely done! ~Hugs, Elizabeth
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 11/14/2010
If I had a compass, Morgan, I'd be glad to toss it your way,
but in these fuzzy years of my life I somehow manage to make
it from here to there on a whim (and a bit of scotch). Thanks
for sharing your wonderful way with words. -gene.
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 11/11/2010
You have a wonderful way with words Morgan, keep it up.

Newfie hugs, Rose
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 11/8/2010
it is hard to fold those maps Morgan, great poem to figure how far it is between good and bad, heaven and hell or wherever there is a distance, of course some won't need a compass headed for hell, the devil already got their course plotted, cheers
Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill 11/8/2010
I love maps, but not to plot a course. Maps for me show me where I've been. This is a great poem! Lots of visuals sliding through the rain.

Peace,
Dayvid
Reviewed by John Flanagan 11/7/2010
"I was never one to correctly fold the map;..." is, for me, the core of this wonderful work, Morgan...and the initial triggers of wind and rain are perfectly in context. Going the distance, making the journey, has to be done without every step plotted or pre-ordained...or we don't live at all in any real sense.
Yes!

John
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 11/7/2010
Sometimes, life is better without the map....in that way, we need to truly trust in ourselves and what and who we may discover along the way. You have a beautiful mind, Morgan.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 11/6/2010
Use your natural instincts, your gut will guide you along with a lot of prayers..Much to read in this one.

Peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 11/6/2010
Excellent work, Morgan. Full of imagery.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/6/2010
Truly from your soul, Morgan; I love this because I can relate to what you have expressed within your verses. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 11/6/2010
Outstanding writing.

Namaste
Tony
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 11/6/2010
This is intricate, bewitching!
I think you have a masterpiece Morgan!
Ever,
Christine
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 11/6/2010
LOVE this...somtimes we have to throw away the map and follow our instinct...you will get there!
Christine
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