|Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
|There are some lovely poetic images in your poem, Morgan. Laurel|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|THE DARKEST HOUR REALLY 'IS' JUST BEFORE DAWN, BUT WITH ONE ALREADY TERRIBLY 'WEATHER BEATEN' FROM ALL THAT RAIN ON THEIR PARADE AND NO ONE TO CARE...CONFUSION, COMPOUNDED BY THOSE 'DULL THE EFFECT' MARTINIS, WILL MOST LIKELY SET IN AND TAKE ITS COURSE. ONE WILL NOT TO BE ABLE TO FIGURE OUT WHICH 'WAY IS UP'...'UP' - TO THOSE 'TREASURED', SO DASHED - BUT SURE, 'TRAILS'. THUS, ASKING FOR HELP IS THE RIGHT THING...BEGGING FOR GUIDANCE IS CERTAINLY CORRECT...BUT ONE MUST BE SURE, BE VERY SURE...THEY ARE ASKING THE RIGHT PERSON. FOR ONLY 'HE' HAS THAT IMPERCEPTIBLE COMPASS ROSE THAT CAN TAKE ONE...'THE DISTANCE'. AN EXCELLENT WORK AND A KEEPER. YES...I DO BELIEVE THIS TYPE OF OFFERING IS YOUR FORTE...YOU DO METAPHORS FANTASTICALLY WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH....JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|Wonderful use of metaphor in this piece, Morgan. Sometimes we get lost along the way -- that map or compass would certainly come in handy along life's roadways. Nicely done! ~Hugs, Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|If I had a compass, Morgan, I'd be glad to toss it your way,
but in these fuzzy years of my life I somehow manage to make
it from here to there on a whim (and a bit of scotch). Thanks
for sharing your wonderful way with words. -gene.
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|You have a wonderful way with words Morgan, keep it up.
Newfie hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|it is hard to fold those maps Morgan, great poem to figure how far it is between good and bad, heaven and hell or wherever there is a distance, of course some won't need a compass headed for hell, the devil already got their course plotted, cheers|
|Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
|I love maps, but not to plot a course. Maps for me show me where I've been. This is a great poem! Lots of visuals sliding through the rain.
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|"I was never one to correctly fold the map;..." is, for me, the core of this wonderful work, Morgan...and the initial triggers of wind and rain are perfectly in context. Going the distance, making the journey, has to be done without every step plotted or pre-ordained...or we don't live at all in any real sense.
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Sometimes, life is better without the map....in that way, we need to truly trust in ourselves and what and who we may discover along the way. You have a beautiful mind, Morgan.|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Use your natural instincts, your gut will guide you along with a lot of prayers..Much to read in this one.
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Excellent work, Morgan. Full of imagery.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Truly from your soul, Morgan; I love this because I can relate to what you have expressed within your verses. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|This is intricate, bewitching!
I think you have a masterpiece Morgan!
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|LOVE this...somtimes we have to throw away the map and follow our instinct...you will get there!